JackJacko - Comment #166,615

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Thank you for the criticism. i have used alot of the advice you and TheAntiCat gave. i have made a large update to the story, and feel that i am close to ending chapter one. After chapter one is done i will probably hound y’all to pre-read it and give feedback (Btw if you have any name ideas those would be awesome, cause im terrible at making names for things).
in closing: thanks for the criticism i will be sure to use your advice, and i will probably look at that game (celestia knows i love me some sci-fi strategy games).


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