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supermonday
supermonday

Thanks for the criticism (took me forever to spell that word correctly)
I plan to have the TS & Trixie rivalry but i might have them forced into helping each other at one point. I also plan to have Derpy/Ditzy be the comedic relief in the serious moments in the story. I intend to have flashbacks to help build on the introduction, like Fallout: Equestria does with memory orbs(if you haven’t read Fallout: Equestria then disregard that comment)
on a side note, did you read the bottom part about spike? if so, i plan to place it into a later chapter. if not, look for it in future chapters.

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