DeviantArt didn’t really need an explanation. We can assume that people know what the site is. Also try to stay objective, “where the brony community really shines” is a bit too opinion based. Also remember that everything that goes outside the site needs a footnote, not a hyperlink. So the channels of the artists had to be put in the external references.
But it looked good. Made some edits on it though. But nonetheless, it was better than the average beginner.
RandomMan
Jul 04, 2012 at 09:37AM EDT+1