DeadParrot222 - Comment #545,541

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Chapters 2 and 3 today (took me long enough)

I’d rather not give criticism just yet (except for “Pinkamina” not being spelled “Pinkamena.” Amateur…bah!) and just say that I’m liking the story so far. When reading something from someone I know, I wait for the moment where I forget that a person is writing it and I’m actually just consuming the content. That happened sometime later in Chapter 3, but I enjoyed it and Chapter 2.


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