Aug 21, 2012 at 05:49PM EDT
Chapter 3: D’awww… You sure this is a sadfic? Because it sure doesn’t seem like one. You probably should have split the chapter in half, perhaps end the first on a cliffhanger. That would much better capture the gradual shift in tone and improve the structure of the story.
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