Evan Hechenbach - Comment #717,656

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RandomMan
RandomMan

Looks ok so far, lacks some html and external references, but definitely good for a beginner.

You might wanna check out the textile thread again, as you forgot things like image width with the top image which was way too big (fixed that for you). If you’re going to show an image in the entry, make sure to first upload it to the gallery and then embed it from there (don’t forget to hyperlink it either).

The origin section could easily get some external references. I would place sites like DYAC in a seperate header if they’re big enough. Also, if you’re going to hyperlink to an external source, always use footnotes and external references, direct hyperlinking only goes with KYM pages.

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