K. Just some notes (btw, these are my opinions, and I'm very picky, so feel free to ignore me):
On the entry itself:
-Headings are a bit big. "h1" headings should be "h2" for most entries (except for a few exceptions).
- type "bq." to make a block quote (for one paragraph) or use blockquote html for any large quotes you have in the entry.
Like so:
“Without even realizing, I went up and I posted up to the first cover point and I’m picking guys off and they’re running by and I’m picking them off, and I’m like ‘How are these guys not seeing me?’ And I realized as I’m fighting that I’m standing in front of a clown, that it’s supposed to be the ‘You have to be this high to ride there’ but my head just happened to be where the clown’s head should be, so I’m using that as perfect cover. And so their sight lines, they’re running through and they’re like ‘Oh it’s just a clown, it’s fine’ but I have my gun posted up there on his hand, like just picking guys off and I love that because it was a perfect moment of like, they have no clue I’m even here, I’m, I’m a stealth clown.”
~ Robert Bowling
- Get rid of the "hmm ^" after "What’s odd about this video is that it was released before the official video was." unless you're still actively researching that part. If possible, find out how that person released the video earlier than the "official video" (I'm guessing it was released on "Inside Xbox" b4 it was released on Youtube). Also get condense the "many, many, many many many more" to simply "many more" or "many, many more"
- "Official video" is unclear. It makes it sound like there is an "official" video dedicated to the phrase "stealth clown" made by Infinity Ward. Change to "the original Modern Warfare 2 Resurgence Map Pack" video.
- Say which Encyclopedia Dramatica article referenced Stealth Clown, but don't link to it unless you mark it as Very NSFW
Other notes:
-A good deal of derivatives, but no video with a ton of views.
-In the scheme of inside jokes (in this case, an inside joke within the Video game, and even more specifically, the CoD community) this one doesn't seem that big. The exact phrase, "Stealth Clown" brings up about 43,000 results on Google for me, which doesn't strike me as huge.
-"Remember me?/MBD" requires people to understand the original joke, but it spawned a YTP meme that encouraged people to understand the joke and produce their own derivatives. The same is true for Ramirez, which has its own Memegenerator entry. Stealth Clown just seems like an isolated inside joke between CoD players to me ¯\(°_o)/¯
-Interest in Stealth Clown peaked a couple months ago, but wasn't that huge, so its potential may have already been used up.
Still a well-written entry tho.
Anywho, those are just my opinions.
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