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Original Characters general (DONUT STEEL). Critique and discussion encouraged.

Last posted May 21, 2013 at 08:56PM EDT. Added May 10, 2013 at 09:01PM EDT
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Share characters you have created.

I'll start:

Name: Alex Thomas Roberson.

Appearance: Black hair, broad shoulders with a light frame, 1.86 meters tall (about 6 feet), blue eyes, white with a very slight olive color.

Setting: An alternate reality where petroleum is much rarer than in the real world. Around the time when expeditions would have been being made to the Americas, building tensions led to a violent outbreak of revolution across all of Europe. Expeditions were not restarted due to economic troubles and are only just recently being attempted. The world is now in the early 1900's, but with steam power being the main source of mechanical energy.

History: A university graduate hailing from a coastal city of disputed name due to political conflict. He abandoned his immediate family to pursue education in Cartography and Oceanography because of the expanding market due to an increase in exploration. He, along with his fraternal twin sister Taima Thomas Roberson, has been selected for the expedition to visit the "far off islands to the East" that have been spotted by solo explorers in smaller ships.

His ancestor Thomas Roberson fought as a General in the Great War and assisted in the overthrow of the former Emperor. He was assassinated during a public appearance and his belongings were distributed among his family and usurpers, one of which being a golden pocket watch made from the melted headstand of the Emperor. This watch is now in the possession of Alex Roberson.

Personality: Reserved, but prone to bouts of paranoia and emotional distress when stressed or confused. He is strongly focused on his educated. He's also a bit of a smart alec and has a tendency to show it even in inappropriate situations.

SHARE THINE CHARACTERS, PLEBEIANS!

Name: Mike Hunt.

Appearance: Handsome, and kind of broad in the shoulders area. Almost 6 feet, brown eyes and kind of light. 16 years of age. Wears long-sleeve shirts and sometimes hoodies. Wears black pants along with dark shoes.

Setting: None. Just likes to walk around the town minding his own business. He currently is at high school, where he is tormented by the other students about his name.

History: Tormented by his name, although some people find him handsome. He doesn't like talking to people, or going to a clinic where he has to give his full name, where sometimes the worker gives a slight giggle. He watched his father, get killed in front of him during a car accident where a large truck broadsided his father's side, where he bled out. He has several bruises and a scar on his left arm. Mike had a history of acing school, but it is blurred out due to the fact that people laugh over his name. He is kind of timid, but can stand up for others when he needs to, however no one does the same.

Pets: Mike had some goldfish, but they later died due to his pet cat being curious. The pet cat, "Bitters" is a very old cat now, but it still loves to play with Mike when Mike has a laser pointer. The pet cat is a brown striped tabby with a white underside. Has amber eyes, and quite long whiskers. The pet cat was adopted by Mike when he knew that the cat wouldn't survive much longer when it was a kitten, and it's paw was severely injured when an owl tried to kill it. The vet where the cat was adopted laughed at Mike's full name, realizing it sounds like "my cunt".

Original character do not steal.

Last edited May 10, 2013 at 10:43PM EDT

Name:Cinos the Hedgehog
Appearance:A blue hedgehog that wears red and white shoes and white gloves (totally not like that Sonic fellow)
Setting:The same setting as the Sonic video games.
History:He fights against Dr. Robotnik because he killed Cinos' parents. It was a very tragic event that changed him forever.
Personality and Powers:He is a very nice character even though he doesn't always show it. Everyone he comes into contact with loves him and the ones who don't love him are obviously evil. He has one power and that is having all of the powers.

Original Character. DO NOT STEAL!!!!1!1!

ConnerABacon wrote:

^ Solid gold right there, you should write a book ^

Why was my OP downvoted? No fair >:(

Do you want me to post about my new original character, Carra S. Miykawk?

Last edited May 11, 2013 at 12:47AM EDT

Name: Squidbat
Appearance:

Setting: In a post apocalyptic world, bats have become the dominant species, and have developed the ability to live underwater. They engaged in a bitter war with the squid rebels, costing both sides the best and brightest of their youth. As the conflict rages, both sides become more zealous, to the point where even civilians are being massacred without remorse. The bat generals are on the edge of unleashing the most devastating weapon in the history of bat civilization, the Hyper Sonar Bomb Mk 7. The squids, in anticipation of complete annihilation, ready their own super weapon, the ink typhoon. On the brink of Armageddon, our hero's tale begins.
History: Love conquers all, even in the most dismal of times. Despite the bitter hatred festering between the bats and the squids, one bat aqua platoon soldier manages to find his soul-mate in a lovely she-squid living in a town just miles from the front line. He risks everything for his love, defecting from the army to flee with her to the safety of the interior. Alas, the affair is cut short when the bat is apprehended by his higher ups, and brutally executed on the spot. Several months later, the she-squid too meets her end at the hands of the Hyper Sonar Bomb Mk 7, but not before releasing but a single polyp into the briny depths. This polyp floats aimlessly through the deep until, driven by its half-bat instinct, it finds a suitable sea cave to rest in. The polyp morphs and grows over the next twenty three months, finally emerging as the dashing fellow you see above. Without any civilizing influences, he grows up as a savage creature. Yet, deep in the most primordial crevices of his brain, he holds on to one desire: Revenge on those who destroyed his family.
Personality and Powers: Squidbat is a simple creature. He does not want for much, only the death of all bat-kind. He curses his half bat heritage, although it grants him powers that no ordinary squid could harness. He can fly at a speed of 500mph, and swim with equal haste. His tentacles are strong enough to break the strongest of bat artillery as if it were a toothpick. Using his bat-sonar, he can develop a 360 degree image of his surroundings, allowing him to respond with lightning speed to any event in his vicinity. These hypersonic sonar waves incapacitate any living organism within earshot, allowing him to make an effortless kill. His squishy body is his only weakness, but he can easily dodge any assault with his breakneck speed.
Original Character, take it if you want.

Name: Edward "The Head" Guevara

Appearance:

Setting: Anywhere, travels through time and space to have adventures.

History: Ed was an English-Cuban communist metalhead from London. He sold his soul to the devil to have immortality. Ed spent centuries studying sorcery, but decayed into a zombie as time went on. He used his magic to travel the universe and fight revolutions across all worlds.

Personality and Powers: Ed hates the establishment, and is a badass violent revolutionary, kind of like V from V for Vendetta. He can't die, and can regenerate any damage. Ed the Head wields the power of Metal Sorcery. He can travel time and fly across galaxies. Has fireballs brighter than a thousand suns that can blow up anything. Can summon legions of the undead. Master of all weapons, and can beat anyone in armed combat.

Unoriginal hybrid character, already stolen.

Blue Screen (of Death) wrote:

Oh, oh, I got one!

Get this, it's a Windows Error…ponified!…haha bet nobody else thought of that (Donut steel)

omg no way i cnt blv u cld cum up wit smthng so as fnyy as sdid xDDDDDddXxxxXDDDDDDL::D:D::::::D:DDDDD:D:DDDDDDDDx3

level4outbreak wrote:

Name:Cinos the Hedgehog
Appearance:A blue hedgehog that wears red and white shoes and white gloves (totally not like that Sonic fellow)
Setting:The same setting as the Sonic video games.
History:He fights against Dr. Robotnik because he killed Cinos' parents. It was a very tragic event that changed him forever.
Personality and Powers:He is a very nice character even though he doesn't always show it. Everyone he comes into contact with loves him and the ones who don't love him are obviously evil. He has one power and that is having all of the powers.

Original Character. DO NOT STEAL!!!!1!1!

My Ultimate the Lifeform will destroy your little Hedgehog.

MY FURSONA

IT'S LIKE…. A PORCUPINE AND A WOLF

AND YOU CAN'T STEAL IT

AND IT IS NAMED LONE CLAW

AND IT IS MARRIED TO WOLF SHADOW

Original Character; Doughnut Steel.

Abilities: Does not Spoil. Deliciousness. Super High Defense.
Disabilities: Can't move around on his own. Can't be eaten.

Last edited May 12, 2013 at 08:25PM EDT

Name: Cale

Setting: An alternate KYM where everyone is sexy and there are no chumps.

Bio: Time-Traveling Inter-Dimensional Fashion-Designing 13-Year Old Physically-Handicapped Japanese Blind Alien Fish Vampire Ghost Robot Wizard Psychic Ninja Ventriloquist Juggalo Empress Neko Furry Feminist Punk-Rock Greaser Social-Justice-inspired Stoner Mime Movie-Star Horse-fetishist who's parents were murdered by the Brotherhood of Darkestness and fights for American freedom in third-world countries with his seventeen girlfriends and sixteen boyfriends.







Dognut stole.

Cale wrote:

Name: Cale

Setting: An alternate KYM where everyone is sexy and there are no chumps.

Bio: Time-Traveling Inter-Dimensional Fashion-Designing 13-Year Old Physically-Handicapped Japanese Blind Alien Fish Vampire Ghost Robot Wizard Psychic Ninja Ventriloquist Juggalo Empress Neko Furry Feminist Punk-Rock Greaser Social-Justice-inspired Stoner Mime Movie-Star Horse-fetishist who's parents were murdered by the Brotherhood of Darkestness and fights for American freedom in third-world countries with his seventeen girlfriends and sixteen boyfriends.







Dognut stole.

lol self insert

Well, I have created a few. Let's pick one:

Name: Queen The Panda
Appearance: She's an ordinary panda, eccept for the big red rudolphish nose.
Setting: The average furry world where most of the OC furry characters from DA and FA live.

History: Born in U.S.A. from emigrated chinese parents she hadn't got an easy childwood. On the teenage she learned to gain some respect by force. Then she was noticed by the president of the WWF (an organization that work for the protection of the natural enviroment, gaining money through fightings among furries) and she was convinced to join them.

Personality: Shy and pacifist like a certain pink haired yellow pony, Queen is reclutant to use violence if it's not necessary. But if for some reasons she gets angry she will unleash all the repressed fury she has accumulated since the last time it happened.

Name: Michael Grey (Or Gas Mask Man)
Appearance: Black trench-coat, teal polo shirt, blue jeans, Gas mask with yellow eyes and strange red triangles under the yellow glass eye sockets, a tank of gasses at his back, large bulky soldier plates and odd syringe shooting bracelets.
Setting: Earth in the future you retards.
Bio: Born with a twin brother who diapered at 4 years, Mike Grey decided to find his brother at 6 years old. Little did we know that he ended up taking a bus to Texas were he was raised by fundamentalist parents till he was 12. Through the 6 years he was with his fake parents, Mike was raised cruelly being forced to obey his parents commands claiming that they are "Acts of god". At twelve, Mike had enough and started a gas leak in his fake parents house and lit the leak with a match. The house blew up and his fake parents died. He then proceeded to spit on their corpses and move on. After getting back to his real parents he followed his dreams of becoming a chemist, joining a criminal organization and went on with his life.
Weapon: A Flame-thrower/sword hybrid that he can ride.
Pros: Smart, Strong as hell, Independent, PHD in chemistry
Cons: Slow due to weapon weight, Low temper, Possibly a pyromaniac

Skeletor-sm

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