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Patrick's Writing Thread #37

Last posted Jan 19, 2015 at 06:47AM EST. Added Jan 16, 2015 at 06:48AM EST
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I guess I should get around to that ._.

ITT post an idea for a slash fic short story and I'll do my best to write it!

Just like the last few threads I don't really HAVE to take your suggestion, and if I don't don't be offended! I probably just don't think I could do it justice with my writing style (or more likely I'm just too lazy).

I'm a little rusty but this should still be fun, so ask away~

Write a sad story about the child of Deltamelon and Particle Mare, who was raised as a single child by a single irresponsible father, after Particle Mare abandoned Deltamelon to pursue a life of crime

Last edited Jan 16, 2015 at 07:26AM EST

Don has a peaceful job on a website full of memes when the unexpected happens…he falls in love with a meme. This story follows the trials and tribulations of a man and his meme. Somehow, love must transcend the boundary between the physical and digital world.

yes?

First off is MrWolfy's request, a semifurry slashfic.

(Foreward: MrWolfy will henceforth be referred to as "Wolfy" and Chris as "Ferin".)

"Really…?"

Ferin's voice was tinged with a viscous venom; floating in his eyes was a look of self righteousness indignation, as though his very presence was being wasted on Wolfy. His gaze drifted away as if suddenly bored of the situation, something Wolfy hated more than anything. Out of all of Ferin's cruel habits this specific one killed him the most inside– the insults he could handle, the light abuse he actually enjoyed in a way, but the cold shoulder hurt him in a way he couldn't describe.

"I- I…" Wolfy weakly whispered. His throat burned, his eyes burned. Every fiber of his being burned.

"You what?" Ferin spat out at him– a single raised eyebrow, glancing back. Somehow there was solace for Wolfy to be found in those eyes that--in return--were seemingly indifferent.

"I– I can't… I can't stand the way you treat me sometimes… You… You've almost been nothing but terrible to me ever since I… Since I confessed to you. Do you not l–" Wolfy held his tongue on this word, the word they've yet to use towards each other. Childish innocence took over his exasperation as he suddenly became too embarrassed to finish his own sentence.

"…Like you?" Ferin said to Wolfy as if immediately reading his difficulty with the other 'L word.'

"Y-yeah."

Wolfy couldn't feel his legs. A tingling sensation radiated from his heart, a small electric shock, resonating within his soul.

"Of course I still like you, what kind of question is that?"

Wolfy looked at the ground by his feet, mildly relieved but still shook up.

"T-then why do we never do anything that… Y'know… That couples do? Why aren't we closer?"

"Do we not go on dates? Don't we live together? Is that not 'things that couples do'?" Ferin actually seemed quite taken aback as he answered Wolfy.

"Well I meant the other things that couples do, like holding hands in public… And stuff." Wolfy was still looking at the ground as he said this, his tail tucked between his legs.

"What… Other stuff?"

"Don't make me say it, Ferin…"

Ferin didn't audibly reply to this, though his mouth moved. Both of their faces flushed immediately.

"I'm sorry… I didn't mean to pressure you or anything. I just don't know where we stand as a couple."

"No, no it's fine. I'd be lying if I said I've never thought about it."

Wolfy was flabbergasted upon hearing this. Not only was Ferin more or less a bitch to him constantly, he never showed even slight interest in Wolfy's body.

"Th-then… Why don't we?"

Double post for post size constraints

"Why don't we what?" Ferin replied coyly.

Wolfy's response was a physical one, Ferin's attention was undivided upon him now; this provided him with a second wind of courage as he inched towards Ferin. His (trembling) hands met with Ferin's shirt buttons.

"What are you… What are you doing?"

Yet again silent, Wolfy diligently unbuttoned Ferin's shirt as if possesed by a deep and ravenous hunger. Ferin reciprocated. Both of their shirts lay on the floor, and a new sense of tension filled the air as Wolfy reached for Ferin's zipper.

"That's… Wait." Ferin muttered, uneasy with not being in control of the situation. His hesitations were interrupted by a kiss, a short peck, and a flash of need in Wolfy's eyes. Ferin gave in and wrapped his arms around Wolfy. Their fur brushed together, softly. They nestled into each other, their combined warmth still not even close to the temperature of the hot breath on each others necks.

Wolfy, impatient, undid Ferin's zipper and fell to his knees weakly. Gasping, he pulled Ferin's boxers down with his teeth. Ferin's knot slid softly against his face as he began slightly shaking with excitement. Looking up, Wolfy gently began to lick Ferin up and down, side to side, slowly and rythmically. The scent of his lover rang heavy through the air, his mind slowly began to go numb as he put the entirety of Ferin's member into his mouth and softly sucked. The rythym took over his thoughts, all at once he became aware of how aroused he was from simply fellating Ferin. Wolfly pulled his own dick out and slowly stroked as he started to suck more aggressively. Suddenly a twitch started from the base to the tip of Ferin; Wolfy responded by speeding up.

The taste of Ferin poured into his mouth. and he reared his head back to cough but instead painfully swallowed and looked up at his partner, proudly. Ferin's face was contorted in embarrassment and pleasure. Wolfy kissed the tip and licked from his stomach to his neck, and embraced him.

Ferin hugged him back tighter and dropped both of their bodies onto his bed. He awkwardly removed his partner's pants, kissing him fiercely. Wolfy turned over on the bed and propped himself on his elbows, positioned for entry.

"I… I'm ready."

Ferin didn't reply, he simply took what was offered to him.

Suddenly being a bit rough, he grabbed Wolfy by the hips and spat on his own penis, rubbing it to get it further lubricated. He hesitated for just a second, but his desires stopped him from asking if it was really alright. As if sensing it, Wolfy turned and nodded.

A slight yelp, a slight moan, a creaking bedspring. The first push was rough but invited a sense entirely new from the blowjob. Ferin's mind was completely gone now, he was animalistic and wide eyed. He wanted, needed, this feeling to continue. A white hot fire burned in the back of his skull, and his hips were no longer under his control. Moderately fast, he was pounding Wolfy who was biting the bedsheet with the side of his mouth. His face was in the bed, turned towards his left to see Ferin devasting him in all the right ways.

The sense of being entered was one Wolfy had never experienced. Hot, uncomfortable even. After a few pumps, though, Wolfy's legs started to buckle. Ferin saw this and started stroking him as he pounded into him. The reacharound sent shockwaves through Wolfy, causing him to tighten, which in turn caused Ferin's limit to drastically lower. A feeling of immense tension and then ultimately relaxation overcame him as he pulled out and unloaded onto Wolfy's back.

Wolfy, showered in love, gasped for air. He already came, the stimulation and stroking had been far too much for him to last. He turned around to kiss his lover, to seal the contract of their love, when an unbearable tingling sensation enveloped him. Ferin was teasing him with his mouth, returning the favor from earlier. His shaft throbbed as Ferin lightly breathed on it, massaging the base lightly yet firmly. With no warning Ferin took him in all at once. Barely recovered from his last climax, Wolfy barely lasted half a minute. Ferin drank him in, locking eyes.

They laid on the bed and cuddled for hours. Life moved slow, life moved fast. The world spun around them as they held one another. Wolfy knew Ferin was mean-spirited and a little cold, but there was no mistaking he loved Wolfy back with all his heart. He closed his eyes and drifted to sleep.

Blue Screen (of Death) wrote:

Write a sad story about the child of Deltamelon and Particle Mare, who was raised as a single child by a single irresponsible father, after Particle Mare abandoned Deltamelon to pursue a life of crime

All my life I've known nothing but a hollow pain… I try and I try and yet I still cry.
Sunrise to sunset, my soul is overcome with a lingering desire to know why…

Why…

Why did you leave me, mom? Was it something I did?
Was it something dad had said? Is that why you hid?
My only regret is never meeting you, never seeing you
Never hugging you, never loving you, never being with you.

Did…

Did you ever think about dad? Did you think of me, mom?
Did you ever worry about me, how I was coming along?
Dad had to raise me alone- he did the best he could.
If you ask me I think he did good, better than I would.

You…

You know dad says you're a criminal mastermind, but…
I don't believe it. Your face in this picture looks too kind.
It's been rough for us so I'm sure it's rough for you
Though I wish I could see firsthand that it's not true

Go…

Gotta go now, mom… I hope you find this poem someday.
Know that I'll always love you no matter what dad may say.
If our paths ever cross, I don't hold it against you or anything
Please embrace me, you don't know how long I've been waiting


<3

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