gillinater23 wrote:
Ok I'll give you that. But anyways, I was wondering if you guys could help a brony out. Trying to write a cross-over fanfic of MLP and Dante's Inferno. I got the first part up and wanted to see what you guys thought. I know they're many spelling errors, even with spell check, but give a little criticism and tell me what you think. Note this is my first try so give a little leeway for me.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uFI7VLhz385wJ_EETTM2nyLZMtd1k1QMUL3dQvv8M2Y/edit?hl=en_US
I haven't played Dante's Inferno so I can't help you out there. Hell, I'm pretty much quoting this so people on this page notice it and you won't be ignored, but I hope you get some constructive criticism and figure how everything's going.
AS FOR THIS NEW PAGE.
The topic of this page has been reserved to Octavia.