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"I can do so much better than professional writers" guy #807154


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TEMMIE FLAKES Hey Vaggie, can I feed Keekee this morning? Awww of course you can thank you frisk. TEMMIE FLAKES V V CO AHEAD, EAT UP. DON'T BE SHY. What are ya' doing? Feeding the house cat. And is staring at her so intensly your eyes are practically glued to her fur part of the proceedure? FLANKS TENNI FLANN Man you just have no sense of humor. "Charlie, Discord is picking on me... YES. Yeah yeah now go Bother Alastor or some s---. Happy 1251, Urthday of your 9th Year Frisk! F--- OFF GINGIVITUS Okay geez, rude... * Extreme Screaming!
What are you, my little ponies, talking about? Imao teehee giggle giggle m lol Oh,hi, Dash! We were just talking about how silly we looked as babies. Word? Well, I'd totally join in but I don't carry my baby, photos- SO CUTE!!! Unicorns being born with longer legs is soooo adorable!! Here's me! Iwas so stubby, but makes sensel Earth ponies are born with stronger legs! And, Dash...oh No feathers eyes not open Skinny legs / hollow bones M 22 That's okay! I have copies of everyponies baby photos!! How invasive but Convenient, Pinkie!
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While I'm all for fan-rewrites of some of the poorer episodes. (I'll admit I've done it myself several times before.) This is less, trying to fix problems to, ripping something apart because of an aspect they personally didn't like… and making it worse as a result…

While I can't nitpick and point out each flaw here and there, this really does have that feeling of "poorly written fanfic" to it.

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Uploaded Mar 29, 2016 at 03:56PM EDT

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