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File: 782783487681234.jpg (90 KB, 352x530) I Anonymous 11/09/17(Thu)18:39:32 No.10249418 >>10249426 >>10249458 >>10249469 >>10249481 >>10249499 >>10249511 >>10249512 >>10249577 >>10249581 >>10249648 >>10249748 >>10249972 >>10250014 >>10250025 >>10250212 >>10250276 >>10250298 >>10250303 >>10250473 >>10250516 >>10250656 >>10250790 >>10250818 >>10250832 >>10251415 >>10251425 >>10251787 at what point does using the word "n-----" become artistically unacceptable? I just did a search for n----- in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results. Is this too much? I want to write realistically but does there come a point where it detracts from the artistry? It's a modern day story dealing with many present-day social issues and my main character is what most would consider a "racist" and so he is very flippant with the word's use but I'm worried that publishers will not accept my novella or see its artistic merit because of this and instead condemn it for being insensitive or intentionally inflammatory. But how else am I supposed to write this sort of character? How often should I use the word? >1 word out of 5 >I just did a search for n----- in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results. I Anonymous 11/09/17(Thu)22:18:10 No.10250025 >>10249418 (OP) >>10249472 I Anonymous 11/09/17(Thu)18:54:10 No.10249458 I like this. Keep going. >>10249472 IAnonymous 11/10/17(Fri)08:24:40 No.10251390 >>10249418 (OP) You're full of s---, OP. Nobody could write a novel with every fifth word being "n-----." >>10249472 That's actually not bad in terms of style, the content is awful though. Post more. Prove it by posting an excerpt within the next five minutes. I Anonymous 11/10/17(Fri)03:14:52 No.10250795 File: laughing_owls_13.jpg (28 KB, 700x466) I Anonymous 11/09/17(Thu)18:56:43 No.10249472 >>10249472 >>10249492 >>10249514 >>10249559 >>10249648 >>10249972 >>10250025 >>10250795 >>10251066 >>10251390 This is beyond genius. I died. >>10249458 here you go. It's a first-person narrative: >The n----- looked like every other n-----, his niggerdom obscuring any humanity that might have lurked within all that niggerness. His niggereyes and his niggerlips smacked of niggerlust. Niggerhands that could neither love nor heal but only grope niggerloving w-----. There are many of those nowadays. It is a n-----'s world filled with n------ who know nothing but niggerways. So the world shall become a n----- too. It is already as violent as a n-----. Already as diseased as a n-----. Already the world has been remade in the n-----'s image. plus a lot of my dialogue has either blacks using n---- or whites from the 4chan type of communities using it in the same casual way that has become prevalent today. >s--------- >potatonigger etc. >>10249621 >>10249472 >>10249418 (OP) This... This is why I come to 4chan Anonymous 11/09/17(Thu)20:00:21 No.10249621 >>10249642 >>10249648 >>10249649 >>10249657 >>10249660 >>10249665 >>10249667 >>10249791 >>10249919 >>10249942 >>10249972 >>1024998 >>10250032 >>10250085 >>10250163 >>10250268 >>10250300 >>10250324 >>10250384 >>10250518 >>10250529 >>10250608 >>10250617 >>1025087 >>10250862 >>10251016 >>10251110 >>10251273 >>10251414 >>10251425 >>10251431 >>10251710 >>10251787 >>10251823 File: exc#3.png (55 KB, 675x605) I smoked a c-------- and browsed the news. A story about n------, written by a n-----, talked about how n------ needed more et. cetera. The needs of a n----- are endless. a n----- on every television channel. a n----- in every movie. nothing but n----- music for n------ and those who wish to be n------. that is almost worse than being a n-----. at least a n----- does not want to be a n-----. a n----- does not want to be a n----- so badly he will kill everyone who is not a n----- just so that he might not be reminded that he is a n-----. I was glad to be alone again in my room, where no n----- had ever been. there are few places like this left in the world. when the n----- was the freed the world became the n-----'s slave. >>10249621 >The tumult of the n------ Holy f--- that line. Is that the title? >>10249621 It just gets better and better. We are humbled. >niggernotions just one piece of gold from this masterpiece. put me in the screencap At night the n------ come out, brave in the absence of light, as if the Night were an accomplice to the n------, lending shadow to the misdeeds of the darkies. Beneath the luminescence of gaudy streetlights the gangs of n------, in feral n----- packs, would stumble and howl, liquored-up on cheap n----- drinks and enthused by the scantily clad negresses. In the day these n------ were more docile. The tumult of the n------ grew tedious and I decided to leave, to walk perhaps to a place where no n------ ever went. To do this I needed to walk down the niggerstained streets and wait in subway overrun by n------. Every n----- looked at me as if waiting for me to call them what they, as n------, knew what I, as not a n-----, knew them to be. Most of the passengers were n------ or niglets. Each n----- stared at the other n------ with the suspicion that infects every n----- due to the violence inherent in each n----- and no one knows what a n----- is capable of more than a n-----. that is why n------ always leer as they do, for n------ assume that everyone has a propensity for violence equal to a n-----'s. >section posted is only 12% n----- >entire book is 22% n----- >there must be sections significantly more n----- than the posted section In the fresh blossoming night air after I had risen from the stench of the niggersoiled subway I felt a peace that can only be known when all n------ are absent. Perhaps this is why n------ are so disgruntle, they never have the chance to leave n------ behind. Perhaps these types of free and fresh nights are not available to n------ who must leer with niggerhate in their niggerheads and niggerhearts all the days of their niggardly lives. But now the streets were clean, vacant of all n------ and the cacophony of n------. I had come out of that n------Gehenna where the golems of the niggerloving k---- waste and writhe. I was lost in the coolness of a midnight devoid of darkies. ets were crean, vacant oI all n------ ana he -Gehenna where the golems of the niggerloving fa midnight devoid of darkies. to return to the n------. Knowing that everywhere Laerhands and their niggernotions But for nom It was almost ruined, knowing I would have to return to the n------. Knowing that everywhere else, n------ were muddying everything with their niggerhands and their niggernotions. But for now there was the peace of no n------. >>10249621 You had one job. >>10250085 he doesn't want to be repetitive okay here is a 500 word excerpt from it I don't really want to post any more of it on here >>10249418 (OP) >at what point does using the word "n-----" become artistically unacceptable? Never . Why would a word ever become unacceptable artistically? As it is with any word of phrase over use should be avoided to improve quality of the work, but if you can't write a racist character without using n----- every sentence then you can't write a racist character. I Anonymous 11/09/17(Thu)22:33:28 No.10250077 Plain and simple >>10250078 >>10250079 >>10250258 >>10250440 >>10250786 >>10251787 File: exc#2.png (34 KB, 675x419) of n----- mind with n----- thought the n----- god brought niggerness into the light the light now niggard lost its purity in place of it the N----- the N----- that is N----- and none n----- shall be but N----- of mind and n----- of soul and n----- of niggerbody the n-----'s body flush and full of n----- heat and n----- history the niggerheart of each n----- forged in n----- fury a n----- to force the life. of n----- mind the n----- morning came harsh like n----- breath niggerblack like a n----- copulating with another n----- to make this N----- even more n-----. mastication of what the n----- made not. of thought no n----- knew but brought anew this n----- age old n----- hatred into the n----- world that world that once knew no n----- now no longer new due to n------. n----- white n------ white like I but n----- underneath. a n----- known by its maker, also a n-----. so from a n----- came a n----- to procreate niggerdom from n----- to n-----. a suit for a n----- a seat for a n----- a salary for a n----- and a n----- book of poetry to be read niggardly in front of a crowd of n------, crowding where the n------ crumble this civilization now left to n------. a n----- of thought and mind a mind of n------ with niggereloquence and niggerarrogance and n----- children fat and nig-lets not yet given the n----- 'ger' wherein the violence of the n----- comes to completion. a harsh sound n----- to say on a tongue fit only for a n-----. with niggersweetness the world comes now full of capitalisticniggers and opportunisticniggers and n------ that are neither being nor beast but only N-----. of n----- mind and n----- thought with the n-----, God brought niggerness into the light once without n------. >>10249621 This is the best thing I've seen online in weeks. god's left hand come from n----- gods now disproven by n----- scientists >>10249418 (OP) >I just did a search for n----- in my 55,000 word novella and it returned 11,986 results. so your novel is roughly 22% n----- >>10249472 >here you go. It's a first-person narrative: this excerpt is 17% n----- >>10249621 okay here is a 500 word excerpt from it and this one only 12% wouold you please post an excerpt with a more dense use of the word? >>10249972 I have stuff where it gets more dense, very stream-of-consciousness type thing but they aren't as accessible so I didn't post from those parts. this is around 300 words I think I Anonymous 11/10/17(Fri)03:39:31 No.10250842 >>10250848 >>10250853 >>10250863 >>10250889 >>10250900 >>10251051 >>10251091 >>10251787 File: exc#4.png (32 KB, 760x731) here a n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- and her niggereyes, iridescent like globes smeared with n----- colour, an iris of niggernature pinned to n----- blackness, so niggerblack it was nearly niggerpurple, so her pupil was, and her niggereyes watch whatever world a n----- sees come to them. wrapped in the n----- temples and n----- traditions that her hot niggerblood inherently had and knew, this world-not-n----- came to this n----- who received it as all n------ receive their portion of that which is existent-with arrogant niggerness. and this n-----(-ess) was saying through niggered words "why don't whytes realize" et. cetera as the n------ s) now repeating what some other n----- had received as sacred secret say. she (the n----- knowledge by which the e iliqyer n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- n----- might at last cast off the illness that whiteness had seeded within them, or so these n------ thought. and this n e ss was now saying whites again in that way n------ always are saying it like how whites say n------ I suppose. >>10250440 idk, it's nowhere near being ready to publish but I'd love to give it to you guys if it was. as you can see I still have a lot of grammatical mistakes and editing takes me forever >>10250842 This is pure f------ gold holy n----- s--- >>10249621 >imagine being the intern at penguin who has to summarise this submission for his boss panicked looking anime grle with alanned expressions on thair taca >tfw you realize all the time wasted on this board was not in vain >tfw you realize nothing will ever surpass this shining paragon of peak /lit/ performance >>10249671 I actually might do this desu just so it stands a chance of being published. just mass-replace the word with something like "gumdrops" and say it is an avant-garde commentary on socio-political inequities Anonymous 11/10/17(Fri)10:46:56 No.10251831 >>10251710 Quintin masturbates to the niggerest of niggerfeet while wishing he could compose niggerverse of this calibre. 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