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KYM Pony General V: We Just Don't Know What Went Wrong

Last posted Jul 01, 2012 at 04:43PM EDT. Added Feb 19, 2012 at 11:27PM EST
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@Best pony discussion

(sorry for the repost i wanted to fix the image)
Page get for fluttershy!


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May 03, 2012 at 03:17PM EDT
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I hate to start a spam filled thread of debating over who’s best pony, buttttt…

It’s on.

There’s reliable links like this that can tell you why she’s best pony.

Even Mr. Adolf thinks that she’s best pony.

I think we know who’s going to win here.

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May 03, 2012 at 03:34PM EDT
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I heard today was Pinkies birthday. So… Have some Pinkie Pie.

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May 03, 2012 at 03:40PM EDT
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@Zarathh: That means me and Pinkie have the same birthday.

>MFW:

Anyways, y’all are being HILARIOUS and all, but I think it’s high time you stop joking around.

I’m sure you can all agree that Applejack is best pont.

May 03, 2012 at 03:44PM EDT
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PONY GENERAL PSA

It’s really hard to link to funnyjunk for your images. It generally gives you that weird symbol meaning you dun goofed. I suggest uploading it to imgur or another image site like that or going to Ponibooru or another pony image board.

FunnyJunk links never work in embeds.


May 03, 2012 at 03:47PM EDT

Explosive Lasers AKA Solaire AKA Sexiest wrote:

@Zarathh: That means me and Pinkie have the same birthday.

>MFW:

Anyways, y’all are being HILARIOUS and all, but I think it’s high time you stop joking around.

I’m sure you can all agree that Applejack is best pont.

So I heard today was your birthday… Happy birthday!

May 03, 2012 at 03:48PM EDT
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Joe Amethyst wrote:

A Long Time Coming Part twooooooooo
For the few of you who probably care. :P

HAPPY BIRTHDAY EXPLOSIVEEEEE

If it goes the road I think it’s going, I’m taking a swan dive out the window. Just sayin’.

Anyways, noticed a few errors. In the fifth to last paragraph, I think it should be ‘they had eaten lunch’, instead of ‘ate’. In the last paragraph, I think it would fit the setting more to have ‘By Celestia’ in the place of ‘By god’. Later in that same paragraph, the situation warrants ‘due’, instead of ‘do’, as in “she was having issues due to how heavy he was.”

Other than that, I don’t see too many errors. Overall, I’d say it’s pretty good, if a bit fast-paced. But, again, that’s just my opinion, and is by no means a problem with the story.

May 03, 2012 at 04:32PM EDT
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Explosive Lasers AKA Solaire AKA Sexiest wrote:

If it goes the road I think it’s going, I’m taking a swan dive out the window. Just sayin’.

Anyways, noticed a few errors. In the fifth to last paragraph, I think it should be ‘they had eaten lunch’, instead of ‘ate’. In the last paragraph, I think it would fit the setting more to have ‘By Celestia’ in the place of ‘By god’. Later in that same paragraph, the situation warrants ‘due’, instead of ‘do’, as in “she was having issues due to how heavy he was.”

Other than that, I don’t see too many errors. Overall, I’d say it’s pretty good, if a bit fast-paced. But, again, that’s just my opinion, and is by no means a problem with the story.

It stays PG, don’t worry. No eyeball stabbing or hair ripping will happen. I don’t like to write anything too dirty anyway, and posting it to the internet on top of that would just be awkward and honestly a bit embarrassing. Sorry to the few grammar errors. I try to not mess it up as much as possible. Though I love proper grammar, I seem to have an issue here and there with stories and such.

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May 03, 2012 at 04:40PM EDT
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Joe Amethyst wrote:

It stays PG, don’t worry. No eyeball stabbing or hair ripping will happen. I don’t like to write anything too dirty anyway, and posting it to the internet on top of that would just be awkward and honestly a bit embarrassing. Sorry to the few grammar errors. I try to not mess it up as much as possible. Though I love proper grammar, I seem to have an issue here and there with stories and such.

“No eyeball stabbing or hair ripping will happen.”
My gosh… I’m getting flashbacks from the Lil Miss Rarity tumblr. What I saw there, I don’t want to see ever again. But I’ll check the fanfic out, if I have time.

May 03, 2012 at 04:43PM EDT
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Joe Amethyst wrote:

It stays PG, don’t worry. No eyeball stabbing or hair ripping will happen. I don’t like to write anything too dirty anyway, and posting it to the internet on top of that would just be awkward and honestly a bit embarrassing. Sorry to the few grammar errors. I try to not mess it up as much as possible. Though I love proper grammar, I seem to have an issue here and there with stories and such.

You should add some porn.

May 03, 2012 at 05:04PM EDT
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@Joe Amethyst
I’ll answer your fic with a few .gifs.
Before reading it:


After reading it:

I’m gonna leave it at that last part.

And btw, just a question. Did you have that idea in your head for a while? And do you constantly think of way of improving your story?
I say this because (and anyone else who’s interested should see this too), Lunar Dawn is in the process of some big improvements. The basic outline of the story and major events are still the same, but I’m always thinking of the little parts I could add in. I’ve also considered new scenes for the other two (a prequel and sequel) throughout writing both of them.
All I’m gonna say with Lunar Dawn, is that once its done, it’s gonna be:
-LONG (four chapters, each with a HUGE portion of text)
- Worth reading (hopefully; I’m starting to observe others (thanks Joe, and to other fic writers out there) and start to take hints on how to formulate an epic story by learning from others)


Somehow, for Joe, this seems relevant right now:

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May 03, 2012 at 05:16PM EDT
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@Unknown.

To be honest, I was bored after a test in history class last Thursday. I spent up until about Tuesday writing it, and now I’m finding difficulty continuing it.

Also, yes, I try to think of ways to improve it, all the time. Usually as I type it down, I’ll rephrase a sentence or structure a paragraph differently so it sounds better than the thoughts I wrote into my notebook. (You don’t even want to see what I wrote, it makes absolutely no sense at some points.)

And your welcome, I think? :P You shouldn’t rely on my writings too much, I’m still fairly new at this.

And it seems to be random picture time again.

The more I look at my fan fiction, and the more Sparity I see, the more that Rarity is starting to become my favorite pony. Someone, please, help me. D:

Edit: No, no. It stays PG, mostly. MOSTLY. Them kissing scenes be pretty steamy. But yeah. I’d feel rather awkward writing one and posting it for all of Deviantart to see.

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May 03, 2012 at 05:31PM EDT
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Tyranid/zerg like Chrysalis!

Reminds me of the Zerg queen.
Have some mind bleaching cute!

Ontop of that; I am perfectly seeing Rarity to be in power armor and a hand cannon, in metroid!

May 03, 2012 at 05:39PM EDT
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Brace yourselves, Joe said “mostly”.
’Mostly" means not-all-the-way-but-close-to

Anyway, I’m starting to try to analyze other people’s fics if they want me to. You’ve got an interesting writing style to say the least. Sure, grammatical errors here and there, but other than that, it’s:

I’m interested to see how the rest is gonna play out.

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May 03, 2012 at 05:41PM EDT
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@Unknown

Thank you. Now, subject change please?

How I feel right now:

May 03, 2012 at 05:43PM EDT
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Joe Amethyst wrote:

@Unknown

Thank you. Now, subject change please?

How I feel right now:

Interrupting subject change says moo!
Best episode ever is the royal wedding.

May 03, 2012 at 05:47PM EDT
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@Unkown: Yeah, I think a lot of people write like that. I’ve had several stories laid out nearly entirely for a few months/weeks. I have major lines and all, and how the story progresses, but not the details, and it isn’t all written down.

Which reminds me, I need to motivate my ass to post the fics I HAVE finished on fimfiction.net.

@Best episode:

This is still a debate? The finale episodes were the best, hands down.

@Some bomb-ass tunes I found!

It’s actually a cover of another BOMB-ASS TUNE, made by d.notive.

And, on a hunch… I think d.notive likes Rarity…

@Joe:

So long as it stays PG I’ll keep writing it and correcting grammar. I mean, it gives me an outlet for my pent-up Aryan rage English rage, so why the hell not?

Just work on proof-reading, and you’re golden.

Edit: Speaking of Nazis and bomb-ass tunes…

A Russian gypsy singing a jazz song about another gypsy performing witchcraft.

TAKE THAT, HITLER!

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May 03, 2012 at 05:57PM EDT
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Explosive Lasers AKA Solaire AKA Sexiest wrote:

@Unkown: Yeah, I think a lot of people write like that. I’ve had several stories laid out nearly entirely for a few months/weeks. I have major lines and all, and how the story progresses, but not the details, and it isn’t all written down.

Which reminds me, I need to motivate my ass to post the fics I HAVE finished on fimfiction.net.

@Best episode:

This is still a debate? The finale episodes were the best, hands down.

@Some bomb-ass tunes I found!

It’s actually a cover of another BOMB-ASS TUNE, made by d.notive.

And, on a hunch… I think d.notive likes Rarity…

@Joe:

So long as it stays PG I’ll keep writing it and correcting grammar. I mean, it gives me an outlet for my pent-up Aryan rage English rage, so why the hell not?

Just work on proof-reading, and you’re golden.

Edit: Speaking of Nazis and bomb-ass tunes…

A Russian gypsy singing a jazz song about another gypsy performing witchcraft.

TAKE THAT, HITLER!

Regarding the music, the first song sounds a lot like Nightwish. I like Nightwish.
Regarding the second song, I can’t understand anything he’s saying but it’s catchy and I like it.

EDIT: I also found some pretty good music by Aviators and Mandopony.

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May 03, 2012 at 06:01PM EDT
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Zarathh wrote:

Regarding the music, the first song sounds a lot like Nightwish. I like Nightwish.
Regarding the second song, I can’t understand anything he’s saying but it’s catchy and I like it.

EDIT: I also found some pretty good music by Aviators and Mandopony.

Yeah, the comments said it was like Nightwish, and the people that made it were kind of aiming for that.

The reason you can’t understand the second song is because it’s in Russian. It’s originally a song from Friendship is Witchcraft, which is a parody version of the show. Pinkie’s a gypsy in it.

May 03, 2012 at 06:04PM EDT
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Explosive Lasers AKA Solaire AKA Sexiest wrote:

Yeah, the comments said it was like Nightwish, and the people that made it were kind of aiming for that.

The reason you can’t understand the second song is because it’s in Russian. It’s originally a song from Friendship is Witchcraft, which is a parody version of the show. Pinkie’s a gypsy in it.

I love Friendship is Witchcraft, I have that song on my Ipad. My favorite episode of it is Lunar Slander.

May 03, 2012 at 06:07PM EDT
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One of these things is not like the others…..one of these things just doesn’t belong…..

May 03, 2012 at 06:24PM EDT
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That last video made me puke rainbows. I don’t even know what to say, it’s so awesome.

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May 03, 2012 at 06:43PM EDT
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Pretty clever, IMO.

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May 03, 2012 at 07:42PM EDT
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So how’s everybody? I feel like I really need to post more substancial things here.

@Fics

I for one am not a guy who reads fanfics, neither wants to make one. Sure I’ve read one or two, like Bittersweet and the one and only mindblowing-heartstopping-manlytears-machine masterpiece called Spiderses, but really that’s one part of the fandom that gets less interrest from me (not like pics as you may have noticed)

May 03, 2012 at 09:12PM EDT
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Dr. Gregory Horse The Pony Medic wrote:

So how’s everybody? I feel like I really need to post more substancial things here.

@Fics

I for one am not a guy who reads fanfics, neither wants to make one. Sure I’ve read one or two, like Bittersweet and the one and only mindblowing-heartstopping-manlytears-machine masterpiece called Spiderses, but really that’s one part of the fandom that gets less interrest from me (not like pics as you may have noticed)

I’ve been fine and all. But I want to ask you a serious question, that the fate of the world rides on… Where EXACTLY did you find this shirt?

May 03, 2012 at 09:16PM EDT
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@Zarathh
I think its WeLoveFine, but I’m not sure though.
That is one shirt I would wear in public during the summer.

May 03, 2012 at 09:18PM EDT
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@Greg


So how’s everybody?

I’m currently suffering from pony overdose.

This thread…oh gawd…so…much….ponu…

…Call the ambulance!….


@Verbose


It’s really hard to link to funnyjunk for your images. It generally gives you that weird symbol meaning you dun goofed. I suggest uploading it to imgur or another image site like that or going to Ponibooru or another pony image board.
FunnyJunk links never work in embeds.

Hard? Try impossible.

Funny Junk explicitly prohibits direct linking to their images!

Linking an FJ image into KYM or any other website will result in a little broken image symbol. This is not a bug, but a feature designed to prevent external websites like KYM eating up FJ’s bandwidth.

So don’t bother with FJ at all, they won’t let you do it.

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May 03, 2012 at 09:21PM EDT
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IM BACK … from the recesses of the internet. Hello again everypony.

May 03, 2012 at 09:34PM EDT

Alcarran wrote:

IM BACK … from the recesses of the internet. Hello again everypony.

Hello, Alcarran Rivarê! I’ve never met you before, and I’m new to these forums, but not the site.
Oh, and also

May 03, 2012 at 09:37PM EDT
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Sandstone wrote:


One of these things is not like the others…..one of these things just doesn’t belong…..

At first, I thought this might be a joke talking about the older gen pony.

Then I saw the X-Ray of a six-fingered hand.

Also, that might’ve been me that tried to upload a FunnyJunk pic. I dunno, I just google shit. BTW, don’t do that for Berry Punch.

SAFESEARCH?

Y U NO SAFE?

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May 03, 2012 at 09:39PM EDT
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Zarathh wrote:

Hello, Alcarran Rivarê! I’ve never met you before, and I’m new to these forums, but not the site.
Oh, and also

[  ] Yes
[  ] No
[x] I dunno, but who cares?

May 03, 2012 at 09:41PM EDT
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Zarathh wrote:

Hello, Alcarran Rivarê! I’ve never met you before, and I’m new to these forums, but not the site.
Oh, and also

I was more active on this site during the summer before season 2 upwards to about 2 months ago. That’s why you don’t know me.

I kind of left the site because my jimmies were rustled by friends seeing all the NSFW stuff in the gallery section and assuming I was a brownie brony, but I’m back for no particular reason.

Soooooo… yeah.

May 03, 2012 at 09:41PM EDT

Alcarran wrote:

I was more active on this site during the summer before season 2 upwards to about 2 months ago. That’s why you don’t know me.

I kind of left the site because my jimmies were rustled by friends seeing all the NSFW stuff in the gallery section and assuming I was a brownie brony, but I’m back for no particular reason.

Soooooo… yeah.

All that crap is in the pass, brony.
Also thank Celestia you missed the shitstorms!
Picture unrelated:

May 03, 2012 at 09:44PM EDT
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@Millenial


[ ] Yes
[ ] No
[x] I dunno, but who cares?

Ehh, I guess no-one cares. Oh well. Have some nostalgia.

May 03, 2012 at 09:46PM EDT
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Ric Tesla wrote:

All that crap is in the pass, brony.
Also thank Celestia you missed the shitstorms!
Picture unrelated:

That picture… pure awesome.

May 03, 2012 at 09:49PM EDT

@Zarathh

Two chaotic beings combined? That will either have a cancelling effect, turning them into a lord of order, or all of existence is officially toast.

May 03, 2012 at 09:51PM EDT
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Zarathh wrote:

Hello, Alcarran Rivarê! I’ve never met you before, and I’m new to these forums, but not the site.
Oh, and also

I don’t say everypony, ‘cept for when I’m writing.

I don’t get pissed at anybody for doing it, though.

However, I do believe I should agree with that fine gentleman… He has a pony…

Regardless, have some Two Best Sisters Play:

May 03, 2012 at 09:54PM EDT
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@Zarathh & Dan

Don’t worry, we can counter their combination with one of our own!

May 03, 2012 at 09:54PM EDT

Alcarran wrote:

I was more active on this site during the summer before season 2 upwards to about 2 months ago. That’s why you don’t know me.

I kind of left the site because my jimmies were rustled by friends seeing all the NSFW stuff in the gallery section and assuming I was a brownie brony, but I’m back for no particular reason.

Soooooo… yeah.

Well I’m glad you could come back! I’m sure that we’ll get to know each other just fine!

May 03, 2012 at 09:55PM EDT
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Dr. Gregory Horse The Pony Medic wrote:

PLEASE DON’T SAY IT WAS BECAUSE OF US MRS. FAUST!

I am seriously hoping she does not mean us, we need some one to ask her if the reason why she is leaving is because of us just to clarify.
I am to scared too even want some one to ask her.

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May 03, 2012 at 10:01PM EDT
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