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File 130379450058.jpg (139.50KB, 1024x691, 130379427810.jpg) It's so lonely Anonymous Mon, Apr 25th, 2011 22:08 No. 6849回 You know, I created a lot of fanfics a few years back- one passing 125,000 words, before I deleted it. For the most part, I was embarrassed of it. I kept changing the storyline until I actually had to write a 'bible' on it. (A bible is where you keep your notes for characters and miscellaneous writings, like ingredients for a recipe that could be included in the book.) Anyway, I had over sixty characters playing active roles in it, and over half of them were unplanned. The fans of this story were disappointed that I deleted the story, but hey, it's a story Well, today I was writing a story for MLP, FiM. It was around three AM when I opened Open Office, and started to tap away. This was after a three day streak of nothing but energy drinks and MLP, so you could guess the grammar wasn't up to par, nor the usage. It was a moderate story; Dash trying to improve both Fluttershy's and Scootaloo's flying skills. At around four AM is when the manure hit the fan. You ever stay up for a really long time, and start to hallucinate? Firstly, images would become distorted. This is a minor occurrence, and happens on the second day. On the third day is when you would see the shadow people. Basically, this is your mind replaying things it's seen- mostly moving things, though you will catch a old child hood toy appearing in your hand. Well, since I stayed up three days watching MLP, you can guess what my mind was doing. I would randomly scream as a pony would walk through my door. They would appear for a few seconds, distorted and in shadow form, before disappearing. This of course didn't stop me. I would continue what I was doing until I could swear I could feel a hoof tapping my shoulder. This was at two AM, and the severity was near it's peak around four The ponies now came in color- usually white, but I would notice a vivid purple or pink come into fruition. I was partly haunted by the images, but excited as well. Then it happened. Scootaloo walked into the room, undistorted and in full color, looked at me, and said in a perfect reincarnation of her voice- Where's Dash? She was supposed to b She frowned, then started to examine my room. I was pressed against my desk the whole time "R-R-Rainbow Dash.. . is "Rainbow Dash is right here. She walked into the room from my closet, which was now giving off a brilliant, warm light. "How did you get here, Scootaloo? You're supposed to be practicing a backflip by now! Come on, back outside with you." She nuzzled Scootaloo back at the door Awww, all right..." Rainbow Dash and Scootaloo exited through my closet. I stood up and approached the door slowly The light grew brighter as I drew close- could it be? I stuck my head inside and peered around. Equestria awaited me. Although extremely distorted, it grew into a more clear shape until I saw rolling hills of grass, and buildings in the distance. Rainbow dash (without her color for a split second before returning to normal.) was hovering above the ground, Fluttershy joined her. Scootaloo was struggling to stay afloat. C'mon, you can do it!" Rainbow Dash encouraged her, part of her color disappearing yet again. "Ha. . ha ha... Equestria was in my closet the whole time. How silly of me." I said aloud, taking a step forward. One. Two. Bump I hit the wall. Of course, I thought this was a force field of some sorts, so I stopped and looked around, starting to panic. "Dash? Fluttershy?" I said, looking to them for guidance. They looked up at me Y-yes?" Fluttershy asked. Dash tilted her head to the side "Do you need something?" Dash asked, coming closer Why can't I enter?" I said, punching my wall with my hand. What? Of course you can enter, try again." I took a step forward, bumped into the wall, then fell backwards with a 'oof! "Well.. that's strange. I'l get Twilight." Dash flew off, leaving me with a struggling Scootaloo and a concerned Fluttershy After a minute, Rainbow Dash returned with Twilight, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and Rarity Although happy to see them, I still wondered why they came "Right here, Twilight. He can't come in. Rainbow Dash pointed to the spot in front of me, then looked to Twilight with concern. This seemed vaguely familiar to me, somehow. As if I seen it before (And of course, I have. On the internet. Pic VERY related.) Twilight walked around the area, using her magic as if checking for something She looked at her friends, then me, then started to whisper something among them. I only just caught it. There's a gate. And it's closing. He can never come in." "No..." I said, looking down. I started to tear up http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NOxg5SX0Uel his song came up on my playlist as she said it. I could barely hear it, though it was still there. "No." I said again, placing my hand on the wall as I started to cry. The tears cascaded down my face. Twilight came closer and put her hoof on the barrier right where mine was. I could feel the slight warmth through it, diminishing ever so slightly. I looked up to the sad faces of everypony. But Twilight's face is what really got me. Emotionally, I started to collapse, and this eventually led to my physical body to do so, too. I fell down and felt the grass turn back into carpet, the warm sunlight disappear and turn back into shadows. The cool breeze turn into warm, stuffy air. The sounds of birds disappeared into the song And I wish there was something, please tell me there's something better.. please tell me there's something, moooooore then this... saturated, loneliness...

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