The Rake

The Rake

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Updated Aug 27, 2013 at 03:45AM EDT by Tomberry.

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About

The Rake is a creepypasta story featuring a humanoid creature that stalks and attacks people in a manner similar to Slender Man. Since 2006, pictures, fan-art and video blogs have been made of the monster, including numerous allusions in the Slenderverse YouTube series EverymanHYBRID.

Origin

The Rake originated on 4chan’s /b/ board in late 2005. An anonymous poster started a thread with the post “hey /b/ lets make a new monster”. Naturally, there were many ideas, but one stood out, and another poster created a new thread based on this idea. The thread started with this post:

Alright, this is for the people who like the three-eyes, no apparent mouth, pale skin one. Here’s what we’ve got so far: Humanoid, about six feet tall when standing, but usually crouches and walks on all fours. It has very pale skin. The face is blank. As in, no nose, no mouth. However, it has three solid green eyes, one in the middle of its forehead, and the other two on either side of its head, towards the back. Usually seen in front yards in suburban areas. Usually just watches the observer, but will stand up and attack if approached. When it attacks, a mouth opens up, as if a hinged skull that opens at the chin. Reveals many tiny, but dull teeth.

This eventually formed into what we now know as “The Rake”.

The Rake went through many design and name changes during its beginning. One of the more prevalent names was “Operation Crawler”. Below are a couple of the “checkpoints” from the thread where it originated.

6 feet tall is good
humanoid
pale greyish skin
2 large eyes on the front of the head because of trips >>14832777 and nature
no nose
mouth that is slightly visable, then opens on a hinge
hundreds of dull but not blunt teeth
eats meat
genitals dont matter because no interviews really talk about that
seen in suburban areas minding its own business
attacks when approched but mostly just stares at people
looks human enough to be able to disguise with fedora and trench coat or similar

revised again,

Approximately 6’ tall, but seen crouching
Humanoid
Pale, greyish skin
2 slightly larger than human eyes
No nose
Mouth that is smaller than human, but when provoked or attacked, opens freely on a hinge down to the neckline, showing hundreds of dull, but not blunt teeth
Unknown origin
Unknown Diet
Seen in suburban areas
Opens it’s mouth and widens its eyes when provoked, attacks when approached
If not provoked or approached, just stares

One of the earliest appearances of the story was posted to the personal blog[1] of Something Awful user Brian Somerville[15] on July 20th, 2006. It was the first story in a series entitled “Horror Theater,” but Somerville does not indicate if the text was taken from another website or if it was written specifically for that blog post. According to the mythology, firsthand accounts of The Rake has been described as early as in the 12th century and documented for the first time in 1691. The story also alleges that strange events in the northeastern U.S. involving the creature led to brief local media interest in the summer of 2003, but most written accounts of the creature have been mysteriously destroyed since.

Primarily focused in rural New York state, self proclaimed witnesses told stories of their encounters with a creature of unknown origin. Emotions ranged from extremely traumatic levels of fright and discomfort, to an almost childlike sense of playfulness and curiosity. While their published versions are no longer on record, the memories remained powerful. Several of the involved parties began looking for answers that year.

In early 2006, the collaboration had accumulated nearly two dozen documents dating between the 12th century and present day, spanning 4 continents. In almost all cases, the stories were identical. I’ve been in contact with a member of this group and was able to get some excerpts from their upcoming book.

The Rake

A Suicide Note: 1964

As I prepare to take my life, I feel it necessary to assuage any guilt or pain I have introduced through this act. It is not the fault of anyone other than him. For once I awoke and felt his presence. And once I awoke and saw his form. Once again I awoke and heard his voice, and looked into his eyes. I cannot sleep without fear of what I might next awake to experience. I cannot ever wake. Goodbye.

Found in the same wooden box were two empty envelopes addressed to William and Rose, and one loose personal letter with no envelope.

Dearest Linnie,
I have prayed for you. He spoke your name.

A Journal Entry (translated from Spanish): 1880

I have experience the greatest terror. I have experienced the greatest terror. I have experienced the greatest terror. I see his eyes when I close mine. They are hollow. Black. They saw me and pierced me. His wet hand. I will not sleep. His voice (unintelligible text).

A Mariner’s Log: 1691

He came to me in my sleep. From the foot of my bed I felt a sensation. He took everything. We must return to England. We shall not return here again at the request of the Rake.

From a Witness: 2006

Three years ago, I had just returned from a trip from Niagara Falls with my family for the 4th of July. We were all very exhausted after a long day of driving, so my husband and I put the kids right to bed and called it a night.

At about 4am, I woke up thinking my husband had gotten up to use the restroom. I used the moment to steal back the sheets, only to wake him in the process. I appologized and told him I though he got out of bed. When he turned to face me, he gasped and pulled his feet up from the end of the bed so quickly his knee almost knocked me out of the bed. He then grabbed me and said nothing.

After adjusting to the dark for a half second, I was able to see what caused the strange reaction. At the foot of the bed, sitting and facing away from us, there was what appeared to be a naked man, or a large hairless dog of some sort. It’s body position was disturbing and unnatural, as if it had been hit by a car or something. For some reason, I was not instantly frightened by it, but more concerned as to its condition. At this point I was somewhat under the assumption that we were supposed to help him.

My husband was peering over his arm and knee, tucked into the fetal position, occasionally glancing at me before returning to the creature.

In a flurry of motion, the creature scrambled around the side of the bed, and then crawled quickly in a flailing sort of motion right along the bed until it was less than a foot from my husband’s face. The creature was completely silent for about 30 seconds (or probably closer to 5, it just seemed like a while) just looking at my husband. The creature then placed its hand on his knee and ran into the hallway, leading to the kids’ rooms.

I screamed and ran for the lightswitch, planning to stop him before he hurt my children. When I got to the hallway, the light from the bedroom was enough to see it crouching and hunched over about 20 feet away. He turned around and looked directly at me, covered in blood. I flipped the switch on the wall and saw my daughter Clara.

The creature ran down the stairs while my husband and I rushed to help our daughter. She was very badly injured and spoke only once more in her short life. She said “he is the Rake”.

My husband drove his car into a lake that night, while rushing our daughter to the hospital. He did not survive.

Being a small town, news got around pretty quickly. The police were helpful at first, and the local newspaper took a lot of interest as well. However, the story was never published and the local television news never followed up either.

For several months, my son Justin and I stayed in a hotel near my parent’s house. After we decided to return home, I began looking for answers myself. I eventually located a man in the next town over who had a similar story. We got in contact and began talking about our experiences. He knew of two other people in New York who had seen the creature we now referred to as the Rake.

It took the four of us about two solid years of hunting on the internet and writing letters to come up with a small collection of what we believe to be accounts of the Rake. None of them gave any details, history or follow up. One journal had an entry involving the creature in its first 3 pages, and never mentioned it again. A ship’s log explained nothing of the encounter, saying only that they were told to leave by the Rake. That was the last entry in the log.

There were, however, many instances where the creature’s visit was one of a series of visits with the same person. Multiple people also mentioned being spoken to, my daughter included. This led us to wonder if the Rake had visited any of us before our last encounter.

I set up a digital recorder near my bed and left it running all night, every night, for two weeks. I would tediously scan through the sounds of me rolling around in my bed each day when I woke up. By the end of the second week, I was quite used to the occasional sound of sleep while blurring through the recording at 8 times the normal speed. (This still took almost an hour every day)

On the first day of the third week, I thought I heard something different. What I found was a shrill voice. It was the Rake. I can’t listen to it long enough to even begin to transcribe it. I haven’t let anyone listen to it yet. All I know is that I’ve heard it before, and I now believe that it spoke when it was sitting in front of my husband. I don’t remember hearing anything at the time, but for some reason, the voice on the recorder immediately brings me back to that moment.

The thoughts that must have gone through my daughter’s head make me very upset.

I have not seen the Rake since he ruined my life, but I know that he has been in my room while I slept. I know and fear that one night I’ll wake up to see him staring at me.

Spread

Reposts of The Rake copypasta began appearing on LiveJournal[2] as early as December 2008. The story made its way to 4chan’s /x/ (paranormal) board by April 2009[3] and to SomethingAwful[14] by June of that year. In August 2010, the story was first posted to the Paranormal subreddit.[17] The Rake was eventually added to horror story databases including Creepypasta.com[4], Creepypasta Wikia[5] and Creepypasta Index.[6] It was also featured on several paranormal-related websites, including Unexplained Mysteries[7] and The Slender Nation.[8]

In December 2010, single topic blog Fuck Yeah The Rake[10] was launched on Tumblr providing a centralized site for the copypastas, “sightings” and fanart about the myth. That month, a picture of a monster character from the first-person shooter game Resistance 3 known as a Grim[18] appeared on a local news station in Louisiana, with the reporter stating a viewer took the photo at a local hunting ground. Due to the Grim’s similar build and features as the one described in the Rake story, many YouTube commenters interpreted it as this monster.



Fan Art

Fan art and photoshopped images of The Rake’s creature depict it as a white/gray crawling humanoid stalking and mauling in the night. There are nearly 8000 images on deviantArt[9] as well as a Tumblr[16] tag with these photos.




EverymanHYBRID Crossover

Slender Man universe YouTube series EverymanHYBRID[11] incorporated the monster from The Rake into the fictional web series beginning in September 2010. In an episode entitled Cops Checked, No Body[12], the main cast encountered the monster running through the woods.

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External References

[1]Panda6.net – Horror Theater – The Rake / 7-20-2006

[2]Live Journal – The Rake / 12-20-2008

[3]4chanarchive [Caution: NSFW content ahead]The Rake / 4-23-2009

[4]Creepypasta.com – The Rake

[5]Creepypasta Wikia – The Rake

[6]Creepypasta Index – The Rake

[7]Unexplained Mysteries – The Rake… What is it?

[8]Slender Nation – The Rake is better than Slenderman

[9]Deviant Art – Results for The Rake

[10]Tumblr – Fuck Yeah The Rake

[11]Youtube – EverymanHYBRID channel

[12]Youtube – Cops Checked, No Body / 9-26-2010

[13]EverymanHYBRID Wikia – The Rake

[14]SomethingAwful – Create Paranormal Images

[15]Something Awful – SLOSifl’s Profile

[16]Tumblr – Posts tagged “the rake”

[17]Reddit – The Rake: One of my favorite ghost-stories for those who have never read it.

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