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I'm gonna write a short story about kym.

Last posted Jan 18, 2010 at 10:03PM EST. Added Oct 19, 2009 at 12:10PM EDT
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Part one; Chapter three

I awoke with a swaying feeling, and I fell off of whatever I was on, and the swaying continued.
I looked around, my eyes still opening.
It looked like a cabin, but it was too out of shape to be one.
On the shelves were broken compasses and guns with no ammo, it seemed like it was some sort of joke.
The walls were covered in pirate memorbillia, covered with flags and whatnot.
I noticed a small desk near me with some soup on it, and a small statue.
Not hungry, I went towards the statue; upon further inspection I found it was a Buddha Statue.
I looked at it with my head cocked and smiled.
I felt delirious and figured my brain was swaying, not the room.
Then the statue talked.
I jumped back about a foot, landing on my back.
"Go up."
I looked at it, with a dazed look on my face.
The day was becoming stranger and stranger.
It repeated "You will find the way, up."
I looked around; there were no stairs, nor ladders.
"Up?"
The statue motioned for me to come closer, so I did.
It smacked me upside the head "Think harder."
I thought Buddha was supposed to be kind.
I stumbled around, dizzy and confused-my captors most have used some sort of drug on me.
The room began spinning, and colors started forming.
The last thing I remember was falling down, square on my head-passing out.
I had a dream, as I lay on the cold, wooden floor.
I was surrounded by that Buddha statue, all of them spoke in unison.
"Up."
"Up."
"UP."
I awoke, and I no longer felt so delirious.
I walked over to the Buddha, and it did not talk to me.
The room did not spin, and there were no colors.
But that creaky swaying was still there.
After about an hour worth of looking, there was no stairway.
No pole, ladder, elevator or even hole in the ceiling.
It was like that room was its own world, and I suddenly felt very alone.
Very alone and claustrophobic.
I rummaged through the desks and shelves, and the only interesting thing I could find was a board game.
I sighed and threw it on the floor, and lay on by hammock.
The pieces to it were spheres with flat bottoms, so they naturally rolled.
One rolled to me, so out of curiosity I looked at it.
It was a sickly green, almost the same color as my skin.
On the bottom were two small letters.
I grinned.
I found up.

meanwhile….

i hated myself
how could i have been so stupid?

i had taken an oath to protect the king, i had sworn my very life to his well-being, and in one moment, because i was so ignorant, everything we had worked so hard for is in jeopardy.

i rose to my feet, and slung my +3 frost guitar over my shoulder, removing my Com Pass from my slightly dusty, yet amazing hat, i headed out east. if i was going to find King Dubs before Redspear, i was going to need help.

i stopped.

what had become of that strange smiling man? the one to spot the assasin before any of the gaurd? in the confusion he must have escaped, or better yet, pursued Redspear…
i pondered my situation.

If Redspear planned on succeeding in his sinister plot, he would have to enlist help, and only the most depraved and malevolent of researchers would even consider this proposal, especially due to the fact that the kingdom has flourished under Dubs's rule, what could Redspear possibly gain by…

my eyes widened in sickening horror, i unstrapped my guitar as a red-haired girl with a torn out ribcage approached me, swastikas of various sizes were burned into her flesh.

"you broke my heart…" i whispered

You get a B+ on that post. I fixed your errors, though.

What is your problem with me? I've been noting but nice to you, so stop attacking me.God, so I'm% not perfect, I'm freakin' 15, chill out!

Part two; Chapter one

I pushed my thumb into the writing, and it began to glow.
In shock, I dropped it, and it began to glow more. The room was soon filled with a haunting green light, I closed my eyes.
Then, a sharp rumbling noise came.
The ground below me started shaking, more than it was rocking. And suddenly, the centre of the room began to shrink.
And expand at the same time.
A hole in the middle of the room, definitely.
Getting wider and wider.
I fell, and landed on cold, hard concrete.
I looked up, and there I saw a flying ship, and the hole began to close-The flag was what caught my eye.
It was a jolly roger, but the skull was deformed, having a long, fat nose.
I looked around, and I almost jumped.
I had landed myself in Redspears lair, and around me, all sorts of mechanical torture devices were strewn about.
The ground was orange and shaggy, like some sort of carpeting.
I heard a door opening, and hid under a rusty medical table.
There, I heard a conversation, between two familiar voices.
Redspear…
I gulped and realized who was with him.
Mafia Boy.
He had the power of ten thousand Failwhales, and the cold, evil heart of an army of Desu's.
"I thought I told you to keep Menning alive." I heard, in a horrendous Brooklyn accent.
"I'm sorry; I just had the perfect opportunity."
"Opportunity? I can summon IT and you thought that THEN you had an opportunity!?"
"I'm sorry…To be fair, it wasn’t there."
"Because I have to summon it-Which I will now."
"Please, I don't want to hurt all of them, just Chris-I gave you my power to summon it, and you gave me the minions. The deal has already been made, why do you want more?"
A long pause occured, and the room's light got darker, the air colder.
"Simple."
"I want my minions back."
I heard Redspear trying to run away, but the doors locked themselves.
I heard chanting in a foreign language, seemingly mingled in a Brooklyn accent.
Then, the room began to glow a sick lime green, and the light bulbs began to shake, then simultaneously short circuited.
Then, I saw out of the corner of my eye, a horrendous beast, slithering around.
I look at the monster.
And the monster…
Looks.
At.
Me.

"He had the power of ten thousand Failwhales, and the cold, evil heart of an army of Desu’s"
i still remember you guys thought i was desu, but is he refering to the same desu

@Blubber

Actually, I haven't even started Part 2 yet. I stopped right after the introduction of Mafia Boy (meaning I just ended Part 1 – Chapter 1 which I had to split into two pages due to size restrictions). But that's okay, Blubber. You can work on Part 3 of the story. I might work on Part 2 but I really doubt I will. Anyone want to take the job? This'll be like a KYM participatory project. Members who volunteered to draw the comics can draw one part of the story each and we could compile all of them in the end (that means I'm done with my part). Sound like a plan?

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