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Alison Rapp's Google Doc Compilation of Hate E-mails and Harassments
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Origin Entry: Fire Emblem Fates Localization Controversy
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![Fire Emblem Fates-Soleil Foleo As seen previously, the conversation is completely changed, instead of a confession from Foleo, we have a semi-non- friday Anyway, in the original, Foleo finally expresses his inner issues with how he thinks others see him, the localization misses that, actually, the localization misses any type of characterization, or at least, meaningful characterization. Soleil taks about her own preferences in romance and also shows a more embarrassed side which is usually absent from the really socially free Soleil. The localization talks about a bottle of shampoo. Oh and, it finally shows what they wanted to make Foleo become. If you've seen C, B and A, you'd know Foleo has some issues with his apperance in the original, the localization takes that out. Let that sink ih. If you want to see all the other documented Fire Emblem Fates changes, check this link: #Torrentia!Downpour S Suppo Translation Nintendo of America Ver Forrest: Hello, Soleil. Im sorry again about the hair debacle! You've looked so down ever since! I can make it up to you. I'd be happy to sew you like mine? Would that cheer you up? Soleil: That's really sweet of you, Forrest, but I that frown upside down," but sometimes that's Soleil:What's up with you, Foleo? YOU calling MY name. Will wonders never cease. don't think a cape will help. I always say,"Tun フォレオから声をかけてくれるなんて hard to do about you Do girls? har. I don't know ソレイユは 女の子が好きなんですよね? あはは 今更そんなことを聞くの? Soleil: Ahaha. You have to ask? Of course! I love cute girls! Soleil: Oh, that's not it! I'm bummed because you wont curls and I are hopeless! あたしは可愛い女の子が大好きだよ! 男の子じゃダメなんですか? Foleo: So you're not interested in boys? I mean Forrest: Why would you say that? There are other Soleil: I wouldnt say I'm not interested in them Soleil: Really? I thought someone super-cute like I mean, look there's no grace with guys, right? we could do besides har! [ソレイユ] 女の子の方が断然好きだよ。 だから、見てても盛り上がらないんだよね you would have tons of friends already So I don't get worked up when I look at them. Forrest: I have friends, but I've always got room やっぱりそうなんですか… Soleil: But I ove you My heart really gets going when I look at you and I just want to squeeze you ch so tight! Soleil: And what if I don't want to be your friend? でも、フォレオのことは好きだよ。 見ててきゅんき ゃんするし Foleo: Realy? You really think that of me? Forrest: Oh! well, in that case, I t be on my 本当にそう思ってくれているのですか? 僕は男なのにこんな見た目で… 気持ち悪いと思ったことはないんですか? boy, but I look lke this? Soleil: How could I ever think such a thing!! Soleil: No! Wait! I didn't mean it lke that. What if I want to be MORE than your friend? フォレオはとっても素敵だもん。 Why would I chase you around so much if you フォレオを悪く言う奴がいたら picking on you, I'1l give em what If for with my ソレイユ If that's true . then would you consider a それな 僕とお付き合いしてくれませんか? Soleil: You know that I have a thing for super cute girls, right? all? I love you. Forrest: Right..but you know that Im.. 僕はソレイユのことが好きなんです。 フォ· フォレオがあたしを好き! ? Soleil: Y-you love me? ご迷惑だったでしょうか? Forrest: Well, Soleil, I think youre pretty adorable ま、 まさかそんな No no Solell: Really? フォレオみたいな可愛い子に告白されて あたし、天にも昇るような気分で Forrest: Yes! You have so much energy. When you show up, you light up the whole room. I don't even mind all of the hair pulling and the Foleo: Soleil! Soleil: Wait a minute! You said I could borrow it 僕は真剣なんです 真剣に返事をして下さい Forrest: Im teasing! In fact, I have a gift for you I got you your very own bottle. ser Soleil: Youre right sorry. But, I ..just dont Soleil: What?! For me? You mean, I can smell like でも、あたし…わかんないよ あたしフォレオに好かれるようなこと I haven't done anything to make you love me いつも追いかけ回してただけなのに らですよ ソレイユは僕が男とか女とか Without worrying about whether I'm a boy ora too, you know girl You said you んな女性は他にはいません。 僕は あなたが好きなんです… There's no other lady lke that around. That's I love you. Soleil: Aww... Thanks, Forrest! You really know a girt feel special 返事を聞かせてください。 ソレイユ Soleil: D-Don't be so mean, Foleo Im the one [BLANK] |いつもはあたしか。説く方だったのに I love you too as a woman loves a man. フォレオが好きだよ 一人の男性として [フォレオ]本当ですか! Foleo: Realy? Soleil... that makes my day! れで僕たちは恋人同士ですね! [ソレイユ ちょっと…扌包きしめないでよフォレオ. Soleil: Aiie! Wait don't hug me, Foleo! どうしてですか? Foleo: Why? Youte always hugging me. Soleil: Being hugged is different from hugging! [BLANK] するのとされるのじゃ違うんだよ! Foleo: Well that's because youfe so cute and I [フォレオ]ソレイユが可愛いのがいけないんで すよ。それに, 自分の気持ちに嘘をつく方が 恥ずかしい ソレイユ言ってませんでしたっけ? Also, lying about what you feel is more embarrassing Isnt that you said, Solell? me レイユ]フォレオのいじわる Foleo: Ehehe. You can handle a little teasing. It's not as if I'm trying to embarrass you in front of BLANK] everyone. Im going to treasure you from now [フォレオ]うふふ·いじわるでいいですよ◇ 恥さらしにはなりたくありませんから。 今まで追いかけ回された分…これからは 僕があなたを可愛がっちゃいますからね。 逃がしませんよ. 僕の可愛いソレイユ。 as you used to chase me around. I wont let you get away, my cute little [ソレイユ] なんか Soleil: Oooh I dont know about this](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/list/001/107/169/eb8.png "Soleil x Foleo S support")
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![Fire Emblem Fates - Lazwald x Luna Lazwald's change to being an "annoyance" is now part of his character in the S support, changing his way of approaching Selena again, taking away from the purpose of the conversation. Most likely because they had to put something in there after they ve already changed Lazwald's character in the t string Odin's insertion is another reminder of discontinuity in the conversations not being fixed properly There are various other lines that were altered or cut to change their interactions and character. For example, Selena doesn't show her less rough side of her character, every mention of it has been cut out or altered in the localization, embarrassment and bashfulness seem to be a target for alteration for whatever reason. As usual, romance, nuance and depth have been shred apart (and probably in this case because they wanted to fit Selena completely in the "Tsundere" character trope without having her also resort to physical violence) #Torrential Downpour S Support Translation Nintendo of America Ver. [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Luna, I have a gift for you today! Laslow: Selena, my darling! I have a gift for you 今日は君に贈り物があるんだ。 Luna: Lazwald what's with you all of a Selena: Hm? For me? ラズワルド [ラズワルドしたっ(いうの? Lazwald: It's this bracelet. I wonder if youll Laslow: Ta-da! It's a bracelet! この腕輪なんだけど… 受け取ってもらえないかな? Luna: !! That .. .b-bracelet Selena: Laslow! Is that...? [ラズワルド] Lazwald: I've always kept it safe, so that I might Laslow: Indeed it is. I've been keeping it one いつか君に渡せるようにって ずっと大切にしまっておいたんだ。 Luna: B-but, why now . why give it to me Selena: But...why are you giving this to me now? で、でも、どうして今 それをあたしにくれるの? [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Ahaha! Why do you think? Laslow: Why do you think I am? あはは なんでだと思う? き、聞いてるのはあたしよ! 早く理由を教えなさいよ! Luna: Im the one asking the questions here! Sena: I'm the one asking the questions here! Tell me why youre doing this, right now Lazwald: Okay well I thought about it a lot Laslow: Fine, fine. You're no fun! I decided to After all that thought, I came to the conclusion give it to you because...well... It's a symbol of that I love you. I want to be with you foreve our everlasting friendship! よく考えたんだけどさ 僕はやっぱり、ルーナが好きだよ。 Selena [ラズワルド] Laslow: Because we I thought it would be nice for you to have a keepsake lke this. It's to remind you that I'll always be here for you. give you this So brace レーナに渡したいなって思ったんだよ。 Luna: I got that part of it! You really thought you wanted to be together my side forever Selena: Yeah, yeah, I get it. You want to be by そ、それはわかってるわよ! あんたはあたしと すっと一緒にいたいって思ったのよね? ラズワルト] Luna: So you've got the bracelet . that you Selena: So...everlasting friendship, huh? Did you その腕輪を… それで、 あたし me give something to Odin too, then? Or...is there What I mean to say is come on..dont you something else you'd like to say? have something else to tell me? 何か他にも言うことがあるんじゃない? [ラズワルド] Lazwald: I dont know? What could you possibly Laslow: Something else? Like what? alking Luna: Erg, I just can't stand it anymore! Why are Selena: Do you really have to be so thickheaded? so なんでこんなににぶいのよ! [ラズワルド] Laslow: Im sorry! I was just kidding あはは Luna: What's a j-joke? Selena: Kidding?! [ラズワルド] Lazwald: I do love you. Consider this bracelet Laslow: I do have something else to say to you. my vow of love to you. 僕は君を愛してる この腕輪はそれを誓う腕輪だよ。 I love you. And this bracelet is a token of my love. And to answer your other question, no, I did not give anything to Odin Selena: Go on. Lazwald: So can you see it in your heart to Laslow: Please, Selena... Will you marry me? 僕と結婚してくれないかな? Luna: Finally! Why dont you just say it honestly Selena: Finally! There it is! Took you long 最初から素直にそう言ってよね! [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Well will you tell me your answer? Laslow: So, um... Do you have an answer for me? それで レーナの返事を聞いてもいいかな? Selena: Oh. Right. I guess it's my turn. I mean, Luna: I-I.. what could I say it's We've known each for so long, y-you know what we've known each other so long... Do I really my answer is without me even saying it! なんていうか その 言わなくたってわかってるでしょ!? [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Nope. Dont know. Not if you dont tell Laslow: Yes. You do me [ ルー Selena: Come on! Don't be cruel. You know how Despite the fact that you know very well .. what I feel あたしの気持ちなんて… わかりきってるくせに are [ラズワルド] Lazwald: aha, come on, let me hear it. I can't | Laslow: Haha, so then say it already! あはは Selena: .. OK. Um...look, Laslow. I really like I-I . love you .too... I always have.I always will, no matter where we end up .I love you. あんたのことが好き 今までも ,すきょ. ラズワルト Luna: So I guess I have nothing better to do Selena: Ugh, fine. Look, I love you! I love you, Laslow 仕方ないから結婚してあげるわ! Lazwald: Thank you ! With this promise, Laslow: Splendid! And will you share your life never be torn apart from each other これで僕たちは…一生離れられないね。 そ、そうよ…幸せにしなかったら 許さないんだから Luna: W-well said .. but I'm warning you, if Selena: Yes! But if you mess this up, I will end you don't make me happy, you'll never hear the you. Understand? end of it [ラズワルド] Lazwald: I know, I know. I'll definitely make you Laslow: Understood. I am yours forever, my love 絶対しあわせにするよ、 お姫様! Selena: So…you know this means you can't be Laslow Selena Laslow: Just kidding! Of course I know that! I promise to devote from here on out. Selena: You better! Oh, and I'll do the same](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/masonry/001/097/430/c84.png "Lazwald x Selena S support")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Lazwald x Luna Here it's more apparent why the cut line in the C conversation takes away a lot of meaning behind their discussion of their previous home, there's also an odd insertion of "Odin" in this conversation this just confuses the reader more because of the lack of mention of their "previous home". Selena continues to suffer from having her character being exaggerated and putting Lazwald down some more. The original Selena is still giving him more space to breathe instead Lazwald is also no longer portrayed as being oblivious and lacking self-awareness, but as an #Torrential Downpour origi Translation Nintendo of America Ver. ズワルド : What do you want, Luna: Lazwald Lazwald: You totally got me the last time I thought I was going to die to fromm ラズワルド [ラズワルド] aslow: Oh, thank goodness! Youre back to もう この前は参ったよ。 あんなに見つめられて 恥ずかしくて死ぬかと思っちゃつた。 your old grumpy self. I was worried you were going to give me the flirty treatment again. I don't think I've ever been so mortified in my life embarrassment if you stared at me like that any Selena: Oh, yeah. Maybe I shouldn't have gone quite so far. You're not THAT bad... I just wanted you to know what it's like. I'm sorry Luna: Y-yeah well about that .. I'm sorry got this downtrodden look Laslow: Eh? Did you just...apologize? Without ou me It's not like you to just me WI ekly apologize some water ナが素直に謝るなんて are you coming 熱でもあるの? Luna: What! How rude! Ive no fever! It's just maybe I've been thinking about old Selena: What? No, I don't have a fever! I was just thinking about...old times はあ!? 失礼ね! 熱なんかないわよ!! 昔のことを思い出してたっていうか [ラズワルド] Lazwald: I guess remembering the world e slow: Ah.I see. Feeling lonely, then? I get came from has put you in a somber mood? that way too. It's hard being so far from home 元の世界を思い出して 寂しくなっちゃつた感じなのかな? Luna: I-I'm not in a somber mood! But now that Selena: I'm not lonely! But...yeah. I miss it.I you mention our world … It's been such a long time since our rightful あ、あたしは寂しくなんかないわ! 元の世界って言 あたしたちの本当の居場所なんて とっくの昔に無くなっちゃつた it now. No point in whining lace, if you can call it that, was taken from us There's no point in bringing it up now. I'm だから今さら何とも思わないわ。 fine it doesn't bother me at all Laslow: Selena... I won't tell you youre wrong We both know we can't go back. Not yet. But...I I guess if you think about it, we've come a longthink about it every day. What if everything went wa まぁ、 考えてみれば もんね 僕もたまに思い出すん 僕たちの生まれた世界のこと No matter how much we fight here, were never もう取り戻せないの( 今でもやっぱり、考えちゃうんだよね。 now, I1l think of it. About how great it Luna: Lazwald [ラズワルド] なんてね とにかく僕が言いたかったのは… ルーナが寂しくなる気持ちは 僕にもわかるなーってこと! Lazwald: Dont look at me like that. Look, what I Laslow: I guess...what I mean to say is, I know want to say is I understand how you feel when you get that loneliness you're feeling too well. I feel it Selena: I already told you! I'm not feeling lonely! あたしは別に寂しくなんてないわ! [ラズワルド1,- Laslow: Haha. Sorry, sorry! My mistake wa あはは ごめんごめん a Selena: Well, er, I mean...maybe there are times I feel a little lonely, now and then, but. Luna: C-certainly there are times when I feel little tiny bit homesick, but Lazwald: But what? Luna: I guess youre here with me ほんの少しだけ寂しくなるときもあるけど [ラズワルド] あるけど? maybe Selena: Well, I have you, at least. And Odin. So completely 孤独って感じではないかも Lazwald: That's the spirit. I'll stick with you は僕がついてるよ。 come on, put on your usual smile! Smile! Luna: W-whenever Im with you, I'm more likely Selena: True...though I'm not sure how cheery I あ、あんたと一緒にいるときは 笑ってるより怒ってることの方が多いわよ! to be enraged than smiling! Lazwald: Ahaha! It has always been that wa Hey, if it's worth anything to you, I1l always be Ill be by your side anytime you need me Luna: D-dont get the wrong idea! It's just my should be if you're my only link to home Laslow: Haha! Now that's the Selena we all know and love! Well, either way, I want you to know まぁ、僕でよければ いつでもルーナの側にいてあげるからね。 otten luck that fate has saddled me with you! had any choice in the matter あんたとはただの腐れ縁なんだから! e with fate, but it has you need something, you can confide in me a way of surprising us mere mortals. Particularly 腐れ縁でも縁は縁だよ。 つでも言って。 when it comes to matters of the heart. Luna: H-hmph! The way you get all pumped up Selena: Are you really flirting with me at a time ou But... yeah thanks. You cheered me up just a little bit. that's my lot in life, eh? Thank you, Laslow. For ちょっとだけ 元気出たわ。 Lazwald: Cool, no problem どういたしまして。](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/097/429/e63.png "Lazwald x Selena A support")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Lazwald x Luna There's a lot of additional fluff which is impossible to reproduce for the type of character that Selena is, which is why the original chose an implied seductive stare (or ust have Lazwald show his actually shy and awkward side because Selena's attentive stare is getting to him, since it's translated as an "intense stare") Like every time it happened before, these conversations lose a lot of nuance and depth again. Selena in the localization sounds like she's angry with him just pestering other girls and hurting their feelings (Selena: I don't care what your intentions are! It's not your intentions that matter. It's how the other person feels. Do you get it yet?), while in the original, she's angry because she's giving them attention instead of her, which is what is implied in the original (and later on in the next support conversations). Selena is talking about herself when mentioning "other women" (e.g. when she mentions that it's embarrassing, when she mentions that Lazwald plays with women's hearts, etc) Lazwald becomes oblivious again, instead of accepting his "problem" (this is because of extra additions in the localization), he suddenly has no self-awareness again Besides the conversation having the same issue like some Camilla, Aqua and Nyx ones. See http:// imgur.com/x9xorBP http://imgur.com/NNjBkZd http://imgur.com/brcyRvK for reference #Torrential Downpour B Suppo Translation Nintendo of America Ver ズワルト Lazwald: Hey, Luna. Looking cute as ever today! Laslow: Selena, my dove! My tired eyes are rejuvenated by the s 今日も可愛いね! Luna: Lazwald you never learn, do you? You do know that if you keep saying whatever know, someday people are going to get sick of comes to mind like that, one day people are just all this empty flattery of yours going to stop listening to anything you say? Selena: Ugh. You never learn, do you ? You ラズワルド あんたも懲りないわね。 そうやって調子のいいこと言ってると そのうち、誰にも相手にされなくなるわよ? ワル{3,0 Lazwald: What are you talking about? Al I ever Laslow: What are you talking about? I speak do is speak from the heart. y true feelings 僕は常に本心しか語らないよ。 Luna: Is that so? From the heart, huh? Selena: Really. Your true feelings, huh? [ラズワルド] Lazwald: I really do think youre cute, Luna, is Laslow: Just so! For example, I truly feel that you are the very image of loveliness 僕は本当に ルーナのことを可愛いと思っているんだよ? Luna: Unfortunately for you, no matter what you Selena: You know what? No. This time I'm not sa 残念だけど、 あんたにそんなこと言われても あたしはもう うろたえたりしないんだから! むしろ逆に、あたしがあんたを うろたえさせてあげるわ! going to just get upset. Nope..I'm going to give It's not going to get me freaked out or flustered you a taste of your own medicine... Loverboy! In fact, Im going to do it to youu! Lazwald: Y-youre going to freak me out? ぼ、僕をうろたえさせる? re Lazwald: Luna? W-why are you staring at me Laslow: S-Selena? What are you doing? な、 何で僕を見つめるのさ? Selena: Mmm-hmm. Momma thinks you'll do juuust fine. Let me feel those arms! Woo! Shivers! A big hunk like you is just what the healer ordered Lazwald: S-stop it, Luna.. that's incredibly embarrassing If you keep looking at me like that... I, I feel like my face is going to burst into flames Laslow: Stop it, Selena.. Please.. No! Stop! や、やめてよルーナ すごく 恥ずかしいよ… これ以上見つめられたら 僕、本当に顔から火が出ちゃうよ Selena: Aw, you're adorable when you're embarrassed, Lazzy. Me likey let's go get some tea, baby. I promise it'lI [ラズワルド] Lazwald: P-please . no more .. stop it already Laslow: P-please...no...more... Youre making me very uncomfortable, Selena! これ以上は もう止めて lunk? Gods, I can't believe I just did that.I Lazwald: Jeez, d-did you have to put it on full Laslow: Ah...is it really that bad when I flirt? I never meant to make a Luna: Consider this your punishment! Selena: Do you get it now? Throwing out al r going around and seducing for playing 無闇に女の子を口説いて回り those empty compliments isn't nice. And even if たずらに女心をかき乱している罰よ ! sideration they were welcome, you can't just play with around with women's hearts like it's some kind people's hearts like that! Lazwald: I-I never meant to do anything like Laslow: But that was never my intention Luna: A woman's heart is a pure and delicate thing not to be trifled with! Whether you planned to do it or not is elena: I don't care what your intentions a not your intentions that matter. It's how the とても繊細で純 なものなのよ! it ou see now You t to feel all that shame a dose of your own あんたもとくと味わえばいいのよ! 挨拶ついでに口説かれて 恥ずかしい思いをした子たちの気持ちをね! medicine! Now you know what it feels like when all those | girls get embarrassed by your flirtatio Laslow: OK! I'm sorry! I'll probably think about flirting do me the honor of helping me learn how. Over tea Lazwald: A-aahhow embarrassing . do ああああ..恥ずかし そんなに見つめないでよ…ルーナ BLANK] BLANK] im BLANK] BLANK] Laslow: Selena? Hey, I was just teasing! Come](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/097/428/b5d.png "Lazwald x Selena B support")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Nishiki x Aqua As described in the A conversation, the tail is still important because it's not only used as a way to "expose the fox" like in folklore, it's a way to also expose other's lies. Aqua is being dishonest about her mental and physical state (she's really tired), and the tail entrances her for the purpose of putting her to sleep. This cut line "You remain so graceful in your strong resolve to live, and yet here, only with me, you show me your weaknesses.." Pinpoints exactly the problem in this situation All of this is cut in the localization The conversation is also a lot more direct with the confession, while the original tried to escalate it The general lack of depth and general childish dialogue that is ever present in every localized dialogue is also present here, obviously #Torrentia!Downpour Translation Nintendo of America Ver. Azura: Zzz... Zzz Nishiki: You're finally sleeping well . Aqua Here I am, gazing at your sleeping face Aqua, sleeping like that. She must be exhausted you've got the look of angel when you're like Kaden: Azura looks so peaceful when she's よく寝てるね アクア。 こうして寝顔を見てると アクアもまだあどけない顔をしている やっぱり色々と大変な毎日を 送っているんだろうな You really must be dealing with so many things Nishiki: Aqua, allow me to touch your hair. Since I'm always letting you pet my tail, just this It's only fair, right? I let her touch my tail little, you won't mind, right? Kaden: I bet she won't mind if I touch her hair. アクア、髪を触らせてもらうよ。 いつもしっぽを触らせてあげているんだか これくらいはいいだろう? Nishiki: Aqua. good morning. You know it's Kaden: Good morning, Azura already morning, right? アクア…おはよう。 もう朝だよ? Aqua: Yeah ah! Morning!? Azura: Wha?! Good morning? Did I stay here all あはは、 嘘だよ。 Nishiki: Ahahaha, I'm just joking Kaden: Hahaha! No. I was just kidding Azura: Oh! I guess I drifted off again. Your tail really does make an excellent cushion. You're regular pillow again BLANK] Once again I've fallen asleep curled up around going to ruin me! I'll never be able to sleep on a 私また あなたのしっぽを抱きながら 寝てしまっていたの? your tail again, have I? Nishiki: Yep Aqua: S-sorry! I've submitted to your kindness [BLANK] ご、ごめんなさい。 またあなたに甘えてしまっていたのね。 again, it seems Nishiki: That's just fine. You know I don't care if Kaden: That's OK. I wouldn't mind. Actually,I'd But more than that, I want to see your sleeping like it if you slept next to me all the time ボクはそんなこと気にしないからね。 それよりもキミの寝顔を ずっと見ていたかったな。 face next to me from now on I could gaze at your face until the morning Aqua: S-stop with the... weird jokes Nishiki: Does it sound like a joke to you? それこそ朝になるまでね。 [BLANK] ちょ、 ちょっと止めて…変な冗談は BLANK Nishiki: I love you, Aqua Kaden: Azura, I'm so in love with you. I could ボクはアクアが好きだよ 強く生きようと凛としていながらも remain so graceful in your strong resolve to watch you sleep every night. I know you havea live, and yet here only with me, you show me こうし lot on your shoulders with. But at least I can be your soft place to fall Won't you stay with me forever? things I cant help you て ses 弱いところをボクだけに見せてくれるキミ can まらなく愛おしいんだ BLANK Nishiki: You probably bear a grand fate far greater than any I can imagine And I think surely there's nothing thing I can do or you, nothing I can give you But I do think I can provide that place of peace BLANK キミはきっとボクには想像もつかないよう 大きな運命を背負っているんだろうね。 ボクにはきっと、それをどうしてあげること も foryou to re でもキミがこうして安らげる場所くらいは Will you join me 作れると思うから ク うん、私もあなたのことが好きよ。 こんなに心が安らかな気持ちになれる Aqua: Nishiki thank you. Yes, I do love you Azura: Oh, my! Kaden, if I had my choice, I'd When I'm with you, I feel like I can truly be at home! So I want to be by your side from now on, if never leave your side! You make me feel so at だからこれからもあなたの隣にいさせて? ou me Nishiki: Yes, of course. I'll be yours and yours Kaden: Then it's settled. You can have me all to alone foreve yourself...always ずっとボクを独り占めしておくれ。 ク Aqua: Yes, Nishiki [An element of the trance Azura: You have no idea how wonderful that magic is present in this line]](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/094/833/430.png "Aqua x Nishiki S support conversation")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Nishiki x Aqua Because of the changes to the C and B supports, the localized version just had to give Aqua reasons for what she is doing. The conversation become more childish and lackluster, even taking out lines that deepen the bond between Aqua/Azura and Nishiki/Kaden There's more depth lost on the meaning of the tails again, but it's only in the support S that there's an explanation, so for the reason, I will spoil the meaning only in the S support. #Torrentia!Downpour Translation Nintendo of America Ver. Aqua: Whew.. today's tactics council went on Azura: That war council meeting went on ar That said, now's the most the most crucial period, so I suppose there's nothing to be forever! I know it's important, but my goodness! 今日の軍議は長引いてしまったわ… でも今が一番大事なときなのだから、 仕方ないわね Nishiki: You're looking pretty tired, Aqua Kaden: Whoa! You look exhausted. I've never seen such heavy bags under someone's eyes! お疲れの様子だね、 アクア Aqua: Nishiki no, I'm fine, really Azura: Kaden, you probably shouldn't tell people Nishiki: Doesn't look that way to me. You've this Kaden: I don't know. You don't seem fine. You pallid look on your face and you're getting bags look paler than death! Do ya need a nap? under your eyes Perhaps 顔色が悪いし、目元にクマもできている。 もしかして寝不足なのかい? you've not been sleeping lately? そうね…夜になると色々と考え込んでしまっ Azura: No, I can't sleep. I just lie there with my Aqua: No, I havent obsessing about so many things and I just can't eyes wide open and my mind racing at night I just start 眠れなくなるの。 Kaden: That sounds terrible! You've got to look それはいけないね。 睡眠をとることは食事と同じくらい大切だ Nishiki: You can't be doing that to yourself! Getting some proper sleep is just as important after yourself, Azura as getting a good meal わかっているわ…でも… 今は泣き言は言ってられないのよ Aqua: I understand all that... but right nowI Azura: I know. I've just got a lot on my plate can't just start whining about it all … Nishiki: With everything you're dealing with, it Kaden: Well, I can't help with that. I try to keep must be exhausting! Looks like you've got a lot my plate empty. But I can at least offer you a of anxiety too キミは色々と大変なんだね 悩みも多いようだし… ボクはこんな性格だし、あんまり人の悩みを! I don't think I'm the kind of guy who can solve 解決することはできないかもしれないけど この間みたいにしっぽを抱き枕の代わりに Remember the other day? I can at least offer してあげることくらいはできるよ? super-soft pillow. Surely that'll help, right? people's problems, but you my tail as a huggable pillow just like then? Aqua: O-oh, please, if you would stop talking of Azura: Do you mean your tail? Nishiki: Come on. look at it, looook at it. そ、 その話は止めてくれるかしら Kaden: What else?! Come on, Azura. I'm being serious. If you don't rest, you'll get sick! can't resist looking at it, Azura: I guess you have a point. Your tail does Aqua: Aaaah aaah Im so pathetic 見逃せなくなる自分が情けない look like it would make a nice pillow Nishiki: All joking aside Aqua, you don't have to push yourself so hard. nice spot to curl up for a nap. Off to bed! If you destroy your body, you're not going to | have anything left to work with and it will all be Kaden: The best! Now follow me. We'll find a アクア、 無理はしないほうがいいよ。 らに。 Azura: All right, Kaden. Thank you. You're always so kind to me Aqua: Nishiki Nishiki: You say that, but I don't think my words [BLANK] are getting through to you. You're going to でもこんな言葉もキミには届かないんだろう continue pushing yourself to the break キミはやっぱり無理をし続ける気がする。 だからそんなときにボクにできることは しっぽを貸すくらいさ。 必要な時にはいつでも呼んでおくれ。 So when you're feeling like you've got nothing left, all I can offer you is my tail Please, call me whenever you need me es BLANK I'm probably intruding on your good nature, but ! when I need to, I'll ty ご厚意に甘えさせてもらうかもしれないけ そのときはよろしくね。 うん、じゃあね。アクア·早く寝るんだよ。 Nishiki: Yes, do that. Now Aqua, you'd best go to s [BLANK] leep quicky es BLANK or entranced.] Nishiki: BLANK Aqua, are you chasing my tail AGAIN? Aqua: Ah! [Note: And this is like someone [BLANK] waking up from a trance.]](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/094/832/2b7.png "Aqua x Nishiki A support conversation")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Nishiki X Aqua The first thing to mention is how the localizers have made a mistake in their translation. They translate原っぱ("harappa" or "open field") to葉っぱ(happa" or "leaves"). Which is why Kaden/ Nishiki rolls around in leaves rather than in an open, grassy field which by definition tends to have no leaves As explained in the C conversation, the identity of the fox and their magic depends on their tails (catching their tail is also a way to de-mask them, which is present in the folklore), so Aqua getting entranced is part of the legend of the "kitsune". This can be framed as a "cultural change", but the dialogue is too descriptive for people in the west to not understand. This again, is completely missing, and was the main theme during the whole conversations Aqua/Azura seems to guilt trip herself in the localization for touching Kaden/Nishiki's fur without permission, while in the original, that type of implication is not present. It's probably because of the missing reason for why she was doing such a thing, that being, her inability to stop because of the magical powers of the tail #Torrentia!Downpour B Suppo Translation Nintendo of America Ver Nishiki: U-urm na What's this? how did I get here again? Oh, yeah! I wandered through this field when I decided to roll around Why have I been sleeping in an open field? Ah! That's right! I'd been rolling around in this in the leaves! They felt SO good. I curled up and omfy, grassy grove, and then I must have fallen asleep Sheesh. always told I've got no sense of the danger of あれ went to sleep. Ha! No wonder people call me lazy! ...Huh? What's that?! I think something's んな野原で寝ているんだろう? it's because of times like this that I'm touching my head! ACK! 原っぱが気持ち良くてゴロゴロしていたら、 そのまま眠ってしまったのか はぁ…こんなんだから、緊張感が無いと 言われてしまうんだろうね Hm? Why do I all of a sudden feel like my tail なんだか、しっぽに触られてる感触が… うわああああ--っ!!! [アクア] What's going on? Azura: Oh, my! Are you awake?! Nishiki: A-Aqua, is that you? Why on Earth are Kaden: Azura? Is that you?! What are you ア、アクアじゃないか!! どうしてこんなところに!? Ol あら、 もう朝なの? Azura: Goodness. This is awkward good morrni Nishiki: This is no time for good mornings! Mind telling why YOU are sleeping with MY tail petting me ar ? And why are どうしてキミはボクのしっぽを 抱き枕代わりに寝てるのさ r hugga Azura: ..Er, I was walking through this field 私…その 自分の意識とは関係なく 身体が勝手に反応して近寄ってしまうの well... it happens without me even noticing, when I saw you over here taking a nap. Ever my body just moves of its own accord to get since the other day, I've been wondering what close to it your fur felt like. This is so embarrassing, butI didn't think you'd wake up! I just barely brushed ou Nishiki: Uh... what? ra: あなたの しっぽに。 Nishiki: Toward my... tail? oh! Ahahahahaha! Of course, now I understand here. I'd be honored to have you stroke my fur what was going, it was that all along, wasn't it? I had no idea you were into foxes! Don't mind, don't mind. The honor is all mine! あ! あははは ! なるほど、そういうことだったのか!! いやいや、光栄だなー! それほどまでにボクのしっぽが 魅力的だったということだもんね! y tail wasj wondrous and bewitching! Aqua: I don't want to admit it, but .. yes ra: Nishiki: So that's why, the other day when you Kaden: Is that why you left so abruptly the other pretended y chasing after me, weren't you? were lost, you were actually ay Aqua: Y-yes, I admit it I just want to touch it, Azura: I'm afraid so. I didn't think I could resist ちょっと 触ってみたくって giving you a little scratch behind the ears! Nishiki: And then today while I was slumbering Kaden: Azura, I'm shocked! away, you were entranced by my tail, And in the それで今日うたた寝してるボクの caressing it, you f Il asleep, huh? ua w you had it in you! ア Aqua: I can't help it .. there's nothing I can do Azura: So am I. I had this overwhelming desire やメ to reach out and touch that silky-soft fur 自分でもどうしようもないんだから Nishiki: Well if that's the case, then youre free Kaden: Well, go to touch it whenever you want to! Look, look! How about a touch? いつでも触っておくれよ! Aqua: Oooh.. don't tempt me so much, please! [BLANK] Ahhh I can't stop thinking about it... it's so cute and fluffy 目の前でフラフラさせないでちょう て仕方な Nishiki: Look deep into my eyes, watch it swing [BLANK] baaac 揺れてますよ Nishiki: Hahaha, no worries BLANK ははは、すまなかったね 角虯たくなったらいつでも触りに来ておく 別に減るものではないからね。 ver you fee petting it, come and do | so, anytime. It's not like it's going to fade away ou Azura: Thanks for being so understanding Nishiki: No problem! Well, I've got to get going. | Kaden: Are you kidding?! This is awesome! hope you visit me all the time now ではボクはそろそろ行くよ。 [ア Aqua: Wait! If you go first, I'm going to want to Azura: Really? I'd love that. chase after · 待って!あなたが先に去ってしまうと 後ろ姿を追いかけたくなるから… you, so... Nishiki: Ahahaha, well then ladies first! あはは](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/094/830/2c1.png "Aqua x Nishiki B support conversation")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Nishiki X Aqua The dialogue has had cultural alterations to it, specifically to the power of the kitsune's tail. In Japanese folklore, a kitsune is a fox with great intelligence that most of the times also have magical powers and wisdom which increases with the time they are alive (and with the tails), they have the power to shapeshift in men or women which they use in various ways depending on the story The fox's tail is important because it's related to their magical powers (besides their identity), and they have difficulty hiding them when in human form, which is why in folklore, one of the ways to determine their identity is to check for their tails when they're confused, drunk, eto In our case, Aqua is entranced by his tail, this whole cultural part of the conversation is completely missing, instead, it's trivialized by making it seem as if Aqua has an obsession with "cute and fluffy things, when it's the magic doing this to her. Further explanations can be seen on the B conversation in As for the rest of the changes, they're the general cut lines and alterations, besides trivializing the characters personalities. Eg. "I gotta practice so everyone will think I'm cool, calm, and collected- #Torrentia!Downpour Translation Nintendo of America Ver. Nishiki: Hey Aqua, how's it going? Kaden: Hiya, Azura! ...Geez. You've got a scary look on your face right now Azura: Oh, hello, Kaden. What do you mean? Kaden: It seems like you've got a bee in your こんにちは。 a: Greetings こんにちは Nishiki: What's this? You've got quite a grim look on your face Just looking at you makes me feel like the air around us is fraught with tension. Are you bonnet- Er, hairdo thingy. What's up? 随分と真剣な顔をしているね、キミは? 周囲の空気がぴりっと張りつめてる感じ. 何か考え事でもしているのかい? WO t something? a: Nothing's wrong this is how I Azura: I'm afraid I don't understand. This is my usual face. Nothing is bothering me rea 普通にしているだけよ。 Nishiki: Ooh, I wish I could project that feeling Kaden: WOW. That is seriously impressive. Man just by being myse I couldn't look that uptight if I tried! そんな風だなんて、 羨ましいよ。 se illage for such a long time, because even when I'm jumping into the fray of war like this, people just think Ive got no sense of the gravity of the 里で平和に暮らしてたせいか うして戦争に参加してても、どうも 緊張感が無いと思われてしまうんだよね。 Azura: No, I guess not. You always have that 確かにニシキはいつも 楽しそうにしているわね。 Aqua: Now that you mention it, you always seem like you go about life so joyfull grin on your face, don't you? Kaden: Ha! Yep! If I'm not careful, people will think I've lost my claws and turned into a pet Nishiki: Ahaha, so that's how people see me やっぱりそう見えるかい? 平和ボケした狐だと思われないよう ve got to be careful not to come across as some sort of hippie Azura: And what would be wrong with that? I wish I could frolic through life the way you do Aqua: I don't know, don't you think you're 別にあなたはそのままでいいんじゃない? | better off like that? Here I'm wishing I could 私は愛想のいいあなたが羨ましいぐらいよーcome off as amicable as you are! ea t makes me happy to hear Kaden: You do? Aww! You're making my tail そう言われると嬉しいね。 しっぽが勝手に揺れてしまうよ。 that. So happy that my tail just starts wagging wag. Look! ..Azura, is something wrong? You're |on its own. Ah ha ha えへへ ha giving me a crazy look right now a: BLANK] Nishiki: Aqua? Aqua... what's the matter all of a[BLANK] Aqua: ...Oh, uh, no. Nothing, nothing at all. I Azura: Oh, my. Forgive me for staring. I've just started thinking about your big tail and just never seen your tail up close. It's so fluffy! あ、 いえ, なんでもないわ。 Nishiki: Oh, is that it? Humans rarely see such a Kaden: I always forget that you humans don ああ、そうか。このしっぽは ヒトには珍しく映るんだったね。 睨まれてるのかと思って びっくりしてしまったよ。 それじゃあボクはこれで。 have tails. It's too bad. They're amazing! splendid tail, it's true I got all flustered because I thought you were Well, I should go. See you later, Aqua well, I better get going. (I can believe I almost reached out to pet him!) a. Nishiki: Whew . Aqua's so great. Always coo Kaden: All right. Catch ya later. *sigh Wow and calm, with that serious air about her 常に緊張感があって冷静で。 ボクもあれぐらい冷静に見えれば、 より美しい狐に Azura's so lucky. She's got that serious look down pat. I gotta practice so everyone will think I'm cool, calm, and collected-just like her! would be even an more beautiful fox [BLANK] [BLANK] Nishiki: Whoa! Whoa! What the? Aqua, what's going on? I thought you had just gone that way. あれ? アクア、どうしたんだい? あっちに行ったものとばかり あっ ええと ちょ、ちょっと道を間違えてしまったわ。 Aqua: Oh? I, no, well . for a minute there, I- [BLANK] I guess I lost my way Nishiki: Oh, if that's what it was, okay BLANK] Aqua: Yes, yes, whatever sorry..! BLANK] ごめんなさい ! Nishiki: I wonder what that was all about ...?[BLANK] She was looking pretty agitated there..](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/001/094/829/88e.png "Aqua x Nishiki C support conversation")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Lazwald x Aqua Some nuances and subtle expressions of emotion are lost here. In the original, Inigo first has the mpression that Aqua understood towards whom the feelings in his dance are directed to, but she was hesitant because of her status as a princess, he then misinterprets her trying to hide her feelings with her thinking that he lkes another woman and wants to help him achieve such a relationship, also believing that she does not have feelings for him. In the localization he's secretive at first and then immediately turns brash in the same situation, this is out of character for the shy and awkward Inigo Another slight difference is how the localization makes it seem as if Inigo is dancing intentionally trying to convey his feelings of love towards Aqua, the original instead conveys that one can simply see emotion through dance, and while Aqua did not fail to notice his feelings of love, she didn't know those were feelings that had to do with her Two smaller quips are again, the lack of the ring and how the localization puts an emphasis on Aqua's royalty as a reason for Aqua and Inigo not being compatible, while the original is much more subtle by expressing things like There's no way Aqua-sama really thinks that. #Torrential Downpour upport Translation Nintendo of America Ver. ふぅ…今日はこれぐらいかな. ▼ Aqua: .Lazwald. Is your dance practice over? [BLANK] ラズワルド。 踊りの練習は終わり?▼ .!? You were Laslow: Lady Azura, is that you? Were you spying on my dance practice again? again? ? [アクア見てたんですか Aqua: Yes. Im sorry for not greeting you. I was Azura: I'm so sorry. I couldn't help myself. You just too enthralled ええ 声をかけなくてごめんなさい。 [ラズワルド] Laslow: Thank you. That's kind of you to say are you...n love? Azura: There's a glow about you. If I didn't know better, I'd think you were in love Laslow: Uh...no! Where'd you get that idea? Azura: Oh. It's nothing. There's a sensitivity to ねえ、 ラズワルド. あなたは..恋をしてるの?▼ ! !どうしてですカ ? ▼ 今の踊りを見て [ラズワルド] Aqua: I thought that from watching your dance your dancing now It feelings based on watching dances. That dance were thinking of someone special. You can tell just now was...you were thinking of a precious me... Perhaps I could put in a good word for you person while dancing. 私、 踊りを見れば気持ちがわかるって。 ▼ Am I wrong? 誰か大切な人を想って踊っていた. ▼ Lazwald: Y-You're not wrong but.... ち、 違わないですけど..▼ see じゃあ私、 [ラズワルド] 何か力になれることはある?▼ ラズワルドは大切な友達 いいえ、大切な同志だもの。▼ だから できる事なら力になりたいの。 Aqua: About Lazwald's pr precious soulmate. So...if there's anything I can do to help, I'd love to. ▼ your skills at Laslow: For someone so in tune with everyone recognising feelings by watching dance are a else's emotions, you sure can be oblivious! 踊りを見て気持ちを理解する力 多分ちょっと鈍ってますよ。▼ a: Lazwald: That's because the dance just now was Laslow: Milady, it was you. You're the person I while thinking about Aqua-sama. You're very as thinking about just now.I guess I'm not as slow if you can't recognise it was about yourself. good at conveying my emotions as I thought. だって今の踊りは アクア様を想って踊ってたんです。▼ キNy気づかないなんて アクア様よっぽど鈍いんですね. ▼ sigh* If you'll excuse me...clearly, I need more え [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Yeah. And, my dance is still a work in [BLANK] progress... Ahh, can't be helped. I'll have to go back to square one and think of different まだまだだっていうことかも. ▼ 戻って違う振り付けでも考えようっと. ちょ、ちょっと待ってラズワルド!▼ ▼ Azura: Wait. Don't go, Laslow! Laslow: Hmm? Azura: What did you mean?! You were thinking on Aqua: What you said just now..what do you そのままの意味ですよ 僕はアクア様のことが好きです. ▼ でも、アクア様は王女様だし… 身分が違いすぎます. ▼ だから見返りは求めません。 聞いてくれただけで嬉しいから…▼ Lazwald: I meant what I said. I like Aqua-sama. Laslow: Milady, I mean exactly that. I'm in love you, but its different from me. So you can't reciprocate. I'm and I am nothing! That's why I can only love glad that you listened to me so..thanks. Aqua: T-That....Don't just give up. You're.slow Azura: Well, now you're the one being oblivious! too. I also..like. love 鈍いのは あなたも同じよ. 私も あなたが好き ▼ Aqua: That I wanted to hep with your love was... [BLANK] a lie. I wanted to.become your favourite あなたの恋の力になりたいなんて 本当は"私があなたのいちばんに ま、まさかアクア様が そう思ってくれてるなんて…▼ [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Uum. Now that we've both opened up ええと なかなか謀が出て来ないですね. ▼ [23ワル その…今度指輪を買いに行きましょう。 結婚するなら必要だろうし. ▼ | [BLANK] | Lazwald: Um From now on Aqua: Lazwald. Im Lazwald: Eh? this time, let's go buy a ring. You SO ラズワルド。 Laslow: Huh? 私はあなたを想って歌う あなたは、私を想って踊って。▼ 指輪や愛の言葉も嬉しいけど… 私にとっては、それがいちばん幸せだから· Aqua: Sing while thinking of you...you danced Azura: There aren't many people I can talk to while thinking of me. I'm happy about the rings about music or singing or dance.....et alone and the words of love but..according to me perform with! I thought we shared something [your dancing] is what makes me the most happy. cial So now I feel like I want to, too Lazwald: Is that so... Yeah, let's do that. This Laslow: I didn't realize our duet had such an tak can wait. Besides it'll be conveyed through | impact on you. 1ラズワルド] そうですね、うん、そうしましょう。 これからの話はそのあとで. ▼ それに 歌に踊りなら、きっと届きます。 僕とアクア様の両親の元まで. ▼ う思うわ Azura: Well, it did. I don't care if you're a prince or not, Laslow. I want to be with you. 。 Lazwald: Well, let's start, Aqua-sama Laslow: Really? Then will you accompany me これからはアクアって呼んで。 Aqua: From now on, just Aqua will do. Lazwald... Azura: Nothing would make me happier. I'll sing [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Aqua. I got it. From now on, I'll dance Laslow: .And I'll dance with you in my heart. for これからも君のために、 躍らせてね. ▼ Aqua: Me, too...From now on, I'll sing for you. Azura: May our song never end! これからも、 あなたのために歌わせて。 ▼](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/masonry/001/092/123/989.png "Azura x Lazwald/Inigo S support")
![Fire Emblem Fates Lazwald x Aqua Inigo is more outright about the reasons for why he danced better, talking about trying to be more self-confident, this is changed to the weird "I remembered what you said and tried to channel my inner Azura.". Him mentioning the difficulty of the ordeal is absent, the original has him be bright red" which means either embarrassment or fatigued because of trying hard/fatigue The original makes Inigo's reaction to Aqua's pendant out to be that she's a good singer regardless of where her power comes from (to which Aqua responds accordingly by encouraging Inigo), while the localization makes Inigo's seem in disbelief, changing his reaction to the pendant in question and making it more seem as if Aqua herself is the one with the power A smaller change is how Queen Mikoto is seen in the original versus the localization. While the original it's more the plea of a mother towards the child so the child could sing with more confidence the localization portrayed this as more of an ultimatum, either Aqua sings with confidence, or have her waste her talent in fear. This changes Aqua's motivation for gaining confidence, albeit slightly #Torrential Downpour upport Translation Original Nintendo of America Ver [ラズワルド] Laslow: Lady Azura, I've you! Did you see me dancing today? ou ア 見つけまし Aqua: Lazwald [アクア] ラズワルド…▼ [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Um..About the dance on todays 今日の戦場での踊りなんですが…▼ Aqua: Yes, I know. You seemed like a changed Azura: Yes! At first, I didn't even recognize you ou あなた、別人みたいだった. ▼ 別人みたいに 素敵だったわ。▼ 良か 今日はアクア様の言う通り 自分に自信を持って踊ったんです。▼ 「僕を見て」「この踊りを見て」って Lazwald: !! Im glad.. Like Aqua-sama said, I Laslow: I remembered what you said and tried tried dancing with self confidence today. While to channel my inner Azura thinking "Look at me!" and "Look at my dance!" .It was really difficult though. すごく難しかったですけどね。▼ I see. [BLANK] You あなた、顔が真っ赤だったもの。▼ [ラズワルド] Aqua: But, it was your most wonderful yet. It Azura: Well, your passion was contagious. We felt like there was power throughout your whole could all feel it. |body でも、 今までで一番素敵だったわ。 体じゅうから、力が湧いてくるぐらい. アクア様の助言のおかげですよ。▼ ごめんんさい ▼ Laslow: It's all thanks to your advice, milady Aqua: Im sorry...I said some cruel things the ! other day Azura: Actually, I wanted to apologize about この前は、あなたに酷いことを言ったわね [ラズワルド] Lazwald: No, I was in the wrong. I really didn't Laslow: You were extremely harsh, but have any confidence when I was dancing on the everything you said was true battlefield until now. What would I do if-it was 僕がわるかったんですよ。▼ 本当は、今までずっと..戰場で踊碍に 自分に自信がなかったんです。▼ 上手くいかなかったらどうしよう。 男のくせにって思われたらどうしようって。 Even Aqua: Lazwald....You really are just like my ラズワルド…▼ やっぱりあなた [ラズワルド] 昔のアクア様 Aqua: Yes. I also always thought the same as Azura: I didn't tell you this, but I used to get you. If I couldn't sing like my mother, and I had stage fright. My mother was so talented... I no self confidence in my singing.. .I sang while knew I'd never measure up! I always worried thinking everyone would make fun of me 私もず あなたと同じことを思っていたの。▼ お母様のように歌えなくて 歌うことに自信がなくて…▼ みんなに馬鹿にされるんじゃないかって 思いながら歌っていたことがあった…▼ ould me [ラズワルド] Laslow: Really? I had no idea あなたの歌は素晴ら いつでも、どんな時でも 私それから変われたの。 Aqua: But, at that time....Queen Mikoto said to Azura: One day, Queen Mikoto pulled me aside me, "Your voice is wonderful...but it comes to She told me my voice was beautiful. I could nothing if you're scar confidence no matter who you're singing for." at waste my talent being afraid. That was a turning that time. And from then on I changed. So It's ed. Please s either learn to sing with confidence, or I 相手が誰でも point for me. I decided to be brave every time I on ら…同じことをあなたにも伝えたかっ Lazwald: So you were worried about me...Thank Laslow: I hope I can perform with such power you, Aqua-sama. I'll try harder. I want to use a one day 僕を心配してくれたんですね クア様みたいな力を、 僕も使えるよ ア [ラズワルド] Lazwald: The mysterious power that Aqua uses Laslow: Your voice has a special power. Out on 戦場でアクア様が使ってらっしゃる 不思議な力のことです。▼ 見た人や聴いた人が元気になって いつもより活躍できる…そんな力。▼ 僕の母も、戦場でそんな踊りを踊って みんなの力になったんですよ。▼ watching and listening the battlefield , you inspire the soldiers. When become energised, and more active than before... you sing, you give them strength and encourage That power. My mother also danced a dance like them to keep fighting! My mother was the same on gave ever Aqua: But...my power can't be used without this Azura: I'm afraid you're wrong. My power comes pendant. So it's not a good goal for you でも…私の力は from this pendant. It's not me ンダントが無いと使えないわ.▼ だから あなたに目標にされるほど 立派なものではないの. ▼ [ラズワルド] そうなんですか..▼ でも、そのペンダントが無くたって 例えが使えなくたって…▼ アクア様の歌が素敵なことに 変わりはありませんよ. ▼ was gone, and that power was gone...the fact Laslow: Hmm. I find that hard to believe Thank you. You'll certainly become a Azura: Well, if you keep dancing like you did あなたはきっと 素晴らしいダンサーになるわ. ▼ 人を勇気づけて、笑顔にする そんな力を使う人に、きっとなれる。 wonderful dancer. Someone who can cheertoday, everyone will be asking you to dance people up, and make them smile...you'll have that kind of power ▼ はい 今はまだ全然届かないですが いつか必ず、そうなってみせます. ▼ Lazwald: Yes...I'm not there yet, but I'll become Laslow: I promise to save a dance for you like that one day I'll sing Azura:I wouldn't mind taking you up on that celebration of your first step. Will you...dance to offer right now. What if I sing and you dance? それじゃあ今日は 夢への第一歩のお祝いに歌を歌わせて. 私の歌で 踊ってくれるからしら。 素敵なダンサーさん?▼ ▼ [ラズワルド] ald: Gladly, Miss Be Laslow: I would love that, mi 麗しの歌姫様. ▼ And you shall be my muse! a:](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/masonry/001/092/121/54f.png "Azura x Lazwald/Inigo A support")
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Fire Emblem Fates Localization Controversy - Alison Rapp's Google Doc Compilation of Hate E-mails and Harassments
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![Fire Emblem Fates Paralogue 7-Shiro Recruit Dialogue #lorrentialDownpour Translation nu A Nintendo of America Ver Uriginal at シノノメほう これが外の世界 [Swo] "So this is the outside world It's more normal than l thought." been kept a secret from me? Pretty dullifyou 思ってたより普通だな。 me. 白夜王国っての [シノノメ はどこだ?秘境の奴らの話を盗み| 聞きしたところ…俺の父さんは白! さて、 [Shiro] "No where that Kingdom of Bak ya? Ac Shiro] Maybe fl ca find this Hoshido place, cording to what loverheard from those guys in the Deeprealm-My Dad's apparently a prince of that Kingdom of Byakuya [Hoshido) then itll ll make sense. 夜王国の王子で [Shiro] From what I overheard back home. my [シノノメ}俺は王族ってことらし dad is a bigger deal here than l thought What's he called aga ? Big Cheese of Hoshido? Which [Shm] "And that would make me royalty. BLI hat were true, then why hasn't Dad said anything about .f courseI can't trust that story い…もし、 んで父さんは黙っているんだ? その話が本当ならな ! would make me... やっぱりそんな話は信じられ [Shiro] dunno. Lile Cheese? must be some ないな。 kind of royalty though](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/list/001/086/933/931.jpg "Paralogue 7 - Shiro recruit dialogue")
![Fire Emblem Fates Lazwald x Aqua Inigo is more outright about the reasons for why he danced better, talking about trying to be more self-confident, this is changed to the weird "I remembered what you said and tried to channel my inner Azura.". Him mentioning the difficulty of the ordeal is absent, the original has him be bright red" which means either embarrassment or fatigued because of trying hard/fatigue The original makes Inigo's reaction to Aqua's pendant out to be that she's a good singer regardless of where her power comes from (to which Aqua responds accordingly by encouraging Inigo), while the localization makes Inigo's seem in disbelief, changing his reaction to the pendant in question and making it more seem as if Aqua herself is the one with the power A smaller change is how Queen Mikoto is seen in the original versus the localization. While the original it's more the plea of a mother towards the child so the child could sing with more confidence the localization portrayed this as more of an ultimatum, either Aqua sings with confidence, or have her waste her talent in fear. This changes Aqua's motivation for gaining confidence, albeit slightly #Torrential Downpour upport Translation Original Nintendo of America Ver [ラズワルド] Laslow: Lady Azura, I've you! Did you see me dancing today? ou ア 見つけまし Aqua: Lazwald [アクア] ラズワルド…▼ [ラズワルド] Lazwald: Um..About the dance on todays 今日の戦場での踊りなんですが…▼ Aqua: Yes, I know. You seemed like a changed Azura: Yes! At first, I didn't even recognize you ou あなた、別人みたいだった. ▼ 別人みたいに 素敵だったわ。▼ 良か 今日はアクア様の言う通り 自分に自信を持って踊ったんです。▼ 「僕を見て」「この踊りを見て」って Lazwald: !! Im glad.. Like Aqua-sama said, I Laslow: I remembered what you said and tried tried dancing with self confidence today. While to channel my inner Azura thinking "Look at me!" and "Look at my dance!" .It was really difficult though. すごく難しかったですけどね。▼ I see. [BLANK] You あなた、顔が真っ赤だったもの。▼ [ラズワルド] Aqua: But, it was your most wonderful yet. It Azura: Well, your passion was contagious. We felt like there was power throughout your whole could all feel it. |body でも、 今までで一番素敵だったわ。 体じゅうから、力が湧いてくるぐらい. アクア様の助言のおかげですよ。▼ ごめんんさい ▼ Laslow: It's all thanks to your advice, milady Aqua: Im sorry...I said some cruel things the ! other day Azura: Actually, I wanted to apologize about この前は、あなたに酷いことを言ったわね [ラズワルド] Lazwald: No, I was in the wrong. I really didn't Laslow: You were extremely harsh, but have any confidence when I was dancing on the everything you said was true battlefield until now. What would I do if-it was 僕がわるかったんですよ。▼ 本当は、今までずっと..戰場で踊碍に 自分に自信がなかったんです。▼ 上手くいかなかったらどうしよう。 男のくせにって思われたらどうしようって。 Even Aqua: Lazwald....You really are just like my ラズワルド…▼ やっぱりあなた [ラズワルド] 昔のアクア様 Aqua: Yes. I also always thought the same as Azura: I didn't tell you this, but I used to get you. If I couldn't sing like my mother, and I had stage fright. My mother was so talented... I no self confidence in my singing.. .I sang while knew I'd never measure up! I always worried thinking everyone would make fun of me 私もず あなたと同じことを思っていたの。▼ お母様のように歌えなくて 歌うことに自信がなくて…▼ みんなに馬鹿にされるんじゃないかって 思いながら歌っていたことがあった…▼ ould me [ラズワルド] Laslow: Really? I had no idea あなたの歌は素晴ら いつでも、どんな時でも 私それから変われたの。 Aqua: But, at that time....Queen Mikoto said to Azura: One day, Queen Mikoto pulled me aside me, "Your voice is wonderful...but it comes to She told me my voice was beautiful. I could nothing if you're scar confidence no matter who you're singing for." at waste my talent being afraid. That was a turning that time. And from then on I changed. So It's ed. Please s either learn to sing with confidence, or I 相手が誰でも point for me. I decided to be brave every time I on ら…同じことをあなたにも伝えたかっ Lazwald: So you were worried about me...Thank Laslow: I hope I can perform with such power you, Aqua-sama. I'll try harder. I want to use a one day 僕を心配してくれたんですね クア様みたいな力を、 僕も使えるよ ア [ラズワルド] Lazwald: The mysterious power that Aqua uses Laslow: Your voice has a special power. Out on 戦場でアクア様が使ってらっしゃる 不思議な力のことです。▼ 見た人や聴いた人が元気になって いつもより活躍できる…そんな力。▼ 僕の母も、戦場でそんな踊りを踊って みんなの力になったんですよ。▼ watching and listening the battlefield , you inspire the soldiers. When become energised, and more active than before... you sing, you give them strength and encourage That power. My mother also danced a dance like them to keep fighting! My mother was the same on gave ever Aqua: But...my power can't be used without this Azura: I'm afraid you're wrong. My power comes pendant. So it's not a good goal for you でも…私の力は from this pendant. It's not me ンダントが無いと使えないわ.▼ だから あなたに目標にされるほど 立派なものではないの. ▼ [ラズワルド] そうなんですか..▼ でも、そのペンダントが無くたって 例えが使えなくたって…▼ アクア様の歌が素敵なことに 変わりはありませんよ. ▼ was gone, and that power was gone...the fact Laslow: Hmm. I find that hard to believe Thank you. You'll certainly become a Azura: Well, if you keep dancing like you did あなたはきっと 素晴らしいダンサーになるわ. ▼ 人を勇気づけて、笑顔にする そんな力を使う人に、きっとなれる。 wonderful dancer. Someone who can cheertoday, everyone will be asking you to dance people up, and make them smile...you'll have that kind of power ▼ はい 今はまだ全然届かないですが いつか必ず、そうなってみせます. ▼ Lazwald: Yes...I'm not there yet, but I'll become Laslow: I promise to save a dance for you like that one day I'll sing Azura:I wouldn't mind taking you up on that celebration of your first step. Will you...dance to offer right now. What if I sing and you dance? それじゃあ今日は 夢への第一歩のお祝いに歌を歌わせて. 私の歌で 踊ってくれるからしら。 素敵なダンサーさん?▼ ▼ [ラズワルド] ald: Gladly, Miss Be Laslow: I would love that, mi 麗しの歌姫様. ▼ And you shall be my muse! a:](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/list/001/092/121/54f.png "Azura x Lazwald/Inigo A support")
![Fire Emblem Fates - Lazwald x Luna There's a lot of additional fluff which is impossible to reproduce for the type of character that Selena is, which is why the original chose an implied seductive stare (or ust have Lazwald show his actually shy and awkward side because Selena's attentive stare is getting to him, since it's translated as an "intense stare") Like every time it happened before, these conversations lose a lot of nuance and depth again. Selena in the localization sounds like she's angry with him just pestering other girls and hurting their feelings (Selena: I don't care what your intentions are! It's not your intentions that matter. It's how the other person feels. Do you get it yet?), while in the original, she's angry because she's giving them attention instead of her, which is what is implied in the original (and later on in the next support conversations). Selena is talking about herself when mentioning "other women" (e.g. when she mentions that it's embarrassing, when she mentions that Lazwald plays with women's hearts, etc) Lazwald becomes oblivious again, instead of accepting his "problem" (this is because of extra additions in the localization), he suddenly has no self-awareness again Besides the conversation having the same issue like some Camilla, Aqua and Nyx ones. See http:// imgur.com/x9xorBP http://imgur.com/NNjBkZd http://imgur.com/brcyRvK for reference #Torrential Downpour B Suppo Translation Nintendo of America Ver ズワルト Lazwald: Hey, Luna. Looking cute as ever today! Laslow: Selena, my dove! My tired eyes are rejuvenated by the s 今日も可愛いね! Luna: Lazwald you never learn, do you? You do know that if you keep saying whatever know, someday people are going to get sick of comes to mind like that, one day people are just all this empty flattery of yours going to stop listening to anything you say? Selena: Ugh. You never learn, do you ? You ラズワルド あんたも懲りないわね。 そうやって調子のいいこと言ってると そのうち、誰にも相手にされなくなるわよ? ワル{3,0 Lazwald: What are you talking about? Al I ever Laslow: What are you talking about? I speak do is speak from the heart. y true feelings 僕は常に本心しか語らないよ。 Luna: Is that so? From the heart, huh? Selena: Really. Your true feelings, huh? [ラズワルド] Lazwald: I really do think youre cute, Luna, is Laslow: Just so! For example, I truly feel that you are the very image of loveliness 僕は本当に ルーナのことを可愛いと思っているんだよ? Luna: Unfortunately for you, no matter what you Selena: You know what? No. This time I'm not sa 残念だけど、 あんたにそんなこと言われても あたしはもう うろたえたりしないんだから! むしろ逆に、あたしがあんたを うろたえさせてあげるわ! going to just get upset. Nope..I'm going to give It's not going to get me freaked out or flustered you a taste of your own medicine... Loverboy! In fact, Im going to do it to youu! Lazwald: Y-youre going to freak me out? ぼ、僕をうろたえさせる? re Lazwald: Luna? W-why are you staring at me Laslow: S-Selena? What are you doing? な、 何で僕を見つめるのさ? Selena: Mmm-hmm. Momma thinks you'll do juuust fine. Let me feel those arms! Woo! Shivers! A big hunk like you is just what the healer ordered Lazwald: S-stop it, Luna.. that's incredibly embarrassing If you keep looking at me like that... I, I feel like my face is going to burst into flames Laslow: Stop it, Selena.. Please.. No! Stop! や、やめてよルーナ すごく 恥ずかしいよ… これ以上見つめられたら 僕、本当に顔から火が出ちゃうよ Selena: Aw, you're adorable when you're embarrassed, Lazzy. Me likey let's go get some tea, baby. I promise it'lI [ラズワルド] Lazwald: P-please . no more .. stop it already Laslow: P-please...no...more... Youre making me very uncomfortable, Selena! これ以上は もう止めて lunk? Gods, I can't believe I just did that.I Lazwald: Jeez, d-did you have to put it on full Laslow: Ah...is it really that bad when I flirt? I never meant to make a Luna: Consider this your punishment! Selena: Do you get it now? Throwing out al r going around and seducing for playing 無闇に女の子を口説いて回り those empty compliments isn't nice. And even if たずらに女心をかき乱している罰よ ! sideration they were welcome, you can't just play with around with women's hearts like it's some kind people's hearts like that! Lazwald: I-I never meant to do anything like Laslow: But that was never my intention Luna: A woman's heart is a pure and delicate thing not to be trifled with! Whether you planned to do it or not is elena: I don't care what your intentions a not your intentions that matter. It's how the とても繊細で純 なものなのよ! it ou see now You t to feel all that shame a dose of your own あんたもとくと味わえばいいのよ! 挨拶ついでに口説かれて 恥ずかしい思いをした子たちの気持ちをね! medicine! Now you know what it feels like when all those | girls get embarrassed by your flirtatio Laslow: OK! I'm sorry! I'll probably think about flirting do me the honor of helping me learn how. Over tea Lazwald: A-aahhow embarrassing . do ああああ..恥ずかし そんなに見つめないでよ…ルーナ BLANK] BLANK] im BLANK] BLANK] Laslow: Selena? Hey, I was just teasing! Come](https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/list/001/097/428/b5d.png "Lazwald x Selena B support")
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