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Last posted Oct 06, 2011 at 09:42PM EDT. Added Feb 11, 2011 at 03:26PM EST
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Ric Te$l@ wrote:

Oops i think i gave you guys to much money so…

Well, it was about that time that I notice that he was about eight stories tall and was a crustacean from the protozoic era

Cite wrote:

Alright, here's chapter 5 of Blitz: Her
Like before, gimmeh feedback.

There's also some white text in the following line, white texted because I dunno how to spoiler mark. It's involves a spoiler for the following chapter, read this after reading that.
Without giving too much away, please don't think this will be some silly, generic ship. This'll be more about a friendship than anything.

I was about to say "Looks like somepony has a crush" until I read the spoiler-text. I think they're both going to be good friends. Perhaps the best.

Aside from that, yeah, can't spot a lot wrong with the chapter. It looks as if Blitz is set for the time being, what with his job at Sweet Apple Acres.

And I realized I didn't do a grammar-check on my fic. ARGH. facetable

Sparty the Spaceship wrote:

I was about to say "Looks like somepony has a crush" until I read the spoiler-text. I think they're both going to be good friends. Perhaps the best.

Aside from that, yeah, can't spot a lot wrong with the chapter. It looks as if Blitz is set for the time being, what with his job at Sweet Apple Acres.

And I realized I didn't do a grammar-check on my fic. ARGH. facetable

I better continue in my fanfic

Sparty the Spaceship wrote:

I was about to say "Looks like somepony has a crush" until I read the spoiler-text. I think they're both going to be good friends. Perhaps the best.

Aside from that, yeah, can't spot a lot wrong with the chapter. It looks as if Blitz is set for the time being, what with his job at Sweet Apple Acres.

And I realized I didn't do a grammar-check on my fic. ARGH. facetable

Blitz does have a crush on her. But it will probably be moreso focused a friendship than a ship-ship.
I'm trying to avoid making it a silly, generic shipping story, and make it more realistic. Blitz' crush won't be the main point of the story.
I'll give you feedback when I finish up your chapter.

Last edited Sep 27, 2011 at 08:30PM EDT

Cite wrote:

Blitz does have a crush on her. But it will probably be moreso focused a friendship than a ship-ship.
I'm trying to avoid making it a silly, generic shipping story, and make it more realistic. Blitz' crush won't be the main point of the story.
I'll give you feedback when I finish up your chapter.

Ah.

I have a good question in either case, though.

If friendship is magic, what does that make romance? (Seriously.)

Cite wrote:

Blitz does have a crush on her. But it will probably be moreso focused a friendship than a ship-ship.
I'm trying to avoid making it a silly, generic shipping story, and make it more realistic. Blitz' crush won't be the main point of the story.
I'll give you feedback when I finish up your chapter.

thas pretty much what i was doing, but this isnt about me.
this is about you
thats all i got else to say on this topic

Erin ◕ω◕ wrote:

Isn't that what would happen if two Derpies (Derpys? Derpii?) came together in the first place?

Karnage wrote:

thas pretty much what i was doing, but this isnt about me.
this is about you
thats all i got else to say on this topic

…I must say, it's not about me. Blitz isn't a carbon copy of my own personality. Nor was he made for any sort of Wish Fulfillment.
Blitz is his own character. He's not me, nor is he based off me.

Last edited Sep 27, 2011 at 08:38PM EDT

Cite wrote:

…I must say, it's not about me. Blitz isn't a carbon copy of my own personality. Nor was he made for any sort of Wish Fulfillment.
Blitz is his own character. He's not me, nor is he based off me.

I meant your fic, remember buddy, i will never care about your health :D
jking, im not that mean
EDIT:@Connor Your welcome for bringing that onto the MLP entry

Last edited Sep 27, 2011 at 08:42PM EDT

Karnage wrote:

I meant your fic, remember buddy, i will never care about your health :D
jking, im not that mean
EDIT:@Connor Your welcome for bringing that onto the MLP entry

Oh. Sorry. The way you worded it made it sound kinda… weird.

Sparty the Spaceship wrote:

Might as well add mine onto Citation's as an afternote.
Chapter 5 of Blaze's Story: The Tour And The Match is right there, for your viewing pleasure.

I'm off to read Cite's fic now.

Alright, read through it. It was silly and cool.
I'm not a huge fan of all the video gaming stuff, but I'll manage.
Still looking forward to more.

Cite wrote:

Alright, read through it. It was silly and cool.
I'm not a huge fan of all the video gaming stuff, but I'll manage.
Still looking forward to more.

Yeah. I'm trying to inject moar humor into it. How am I doing on that part?

The gaming isn't going to be a primary focus after Chapter 4. It'll fade into the background and get a mention here and there, but other than that it'll go invisible after this.

Speaking of which, after Blaze has gotten to know everyone, I'm gonna need a plotline.

Sparty the Spaceship wrote:

Yeah. I'm trying to inject moar humor into it. How am I doing on that part?

The gaming isn't going to be a primary focus after Chapter 4. It'll fade into the background and get a mention here and there, but other than that it'll go invisible after this.

Speaking of which, after Blaze has gotten to know everyone, I'm gonna need a plotline.

You're doing pretty well.
As for the plotline… hmm.
How about Cthulhu shows up, destroys Equestria and everything Blaze always loved, and she's the last remaining pony in the world and needs to get revenge by killing Cthulhu and using his spirit to restore Equestria, but it doesn't work for some reason and then she dies sad and alone?!
…
Nope?
Didn't think so.
Hmm….

Cite wrote:

You're doing pretty well.
As for the plotline… hmm.
How about Cthulhu shows up, destroys Equestria and everything Blaze always loved, and she's the last remaining pony in the world and needs to get revenge by killing Cthulhu and using his spirit to restore Equestria, but it doesn't work for some reason and then she dies sad and alone?!
…
Nope?
Didn't think so.
Hmm….

Works good for a nightmare. Or perhaps a distraction for a return of Discord. Or Nightmare Moon.

Nah, seems more Discord's style.

And of course it wouldn't work. The Call of Cthulhu RPG guide says it's not recommended to nuke Cthulhu, because then you fight a radioactive Cthulhu. Though it wouldn't matter, as she'd die.

But yeah. The plotline would probably involve a great evil attempting to take over Equestria, and Blaze being the only one along with the Elements of Harmony able to stop it.

Cite wrote:

You're doing pretty well.
As for the plotline… hmm.
How about Cthulhu shows up, destroys Equestria and everything Blaze always loved, and she's the last remaining pony in the world and needs to get revenge by killing Cthulhu and using his spirit to restore Equestria, but it doesn't work for some reason and then she dies sad and alone?!
…
Nope?
Didn't think so.
Hmm….

its funny you said that.
I got a corny intro# for how Cthulu gets there, but not for the part where she dies sad and alone o-o
for that, around the bottom of the doc,

Last edited Sep 27, 2011 at 08:59PM EDT

Sparty the Spaceship wrote:

Works good for a nightmare. Or perhaps a distraction for a return of Discord. Or Nightmare Moon.

Nah, seems more Discord's style.

And of course it wouldn't work. The Call of Cthulhu RPG guide says it's not recommended to nuke Cthulhu, because then you fight a radioactive Cthulhu. Though it wouldn't matter, as she'd die.

But yeah. The plotline would probably involve a great evil attempting to take over Equestria, and Blaze being the only one along with the Elements of Harmony able to stop it.

I was joking. I don't recommend using my Cthulhu idea ever. Unless you decide to write a crack/trollfic.
…Karnage, don't you get any ideas.

@Citation: Yeah. Not using the Cthulhu idea. Still, the premise of a great evil would work well.

The question is, do I play it like Discord and Nightmare, only with a different personality to offset it, or do I make the evil srs bsns and GRIMDARK, to be different.

Idunno.

@Karnage: …what is that I don't even.

Sparty the Spaceship wrote:

@Citation: Yeah. Not using the Cthulhu idea. Still, the premise of a great evil would work well.

The question is, do I play it like Discord and Nightmare, only with a different personality to offset it, or do I make the evil srs bsns and GRIMDARK, to be different.

Idunno.

@Karnage: …what is that I don't even.

Do not.
I repeat.
Do not
make this grimdark.

Last edited Sep 27, 2011 at 09:05PM EDT

Mr Bumhole #1 Fan Of Osaka wrote:

Due to his super unique design, it's pretty hard to humanize Discord….but I think this one works.

I love how it not only captures his randomness, but it actually recreates the specific animal parts with the clothes. I love it. Sauce

That…

…that's actually pretty cool. Does fit in well with the whole "Discord is a god of Chaos" thing too.

I approve.

@Cite: My rapid-fire mind just found an idea for a villain. He's got the motivation, the personality skills, and the voice to be a seriously grim villain.

The thing is, his plans are often stupidly, stupidly specific, so completely unbelievable and impossible (even by FIM standards) that they barely have a shred of working, and plans made out of sheer anger that basically just require hoping and praying they'll fall into the trap.

What mooks he has are also incompetent, more punchclock mooks more interested in hobbies or money or other things.

Last edited Sep 27, 2011 at 09:08PM EDT

Mr Bumhole #1 Fan Of Osaka wrote:

Due to his super unique design, it's pretty hard to humanize Discord….but I think this one works.

I love how it not only captures his randomness, but it actually recreates the specific animal parts with the clothes. I love it. Sauce

That human discord looks pretty awesome (though it looks like a scarecrow lol)
Also, isn't that artist a girl too?

Dr. Gregory Horse The Pony Medic wrote:

That human discord looks pretty awesome (though it looks like a scarecrow lol)
Also, isn't that artist a girl too?

Yes indeed, Emlan is a girl and she comes from Sweden I believe. My fav pony artist, skilled at Ponys, Humans AND Dogs…..that one doesnt come up very much.

Mr Bumhole #1 Fan Of Osaka wrote:

Yes indeed, Emlan is a girl and she comes from Sweden I believe. My fav pony artist, skilled at Ponys, Humans AND Dogs…..that one doesnt come up very much.

I just don't like that drawing for some reason, it's probably the hat and the coat… He looks like a pimp, no me gusta.

Erin ◕ω◕ wrote:

I just don't like that drawing for some reason, it's probably the hat and the coat… He looks like a pimp, no me gusta.

Pimpscord.

That is all.

Mr Bumhole #1 Fan Of Osaka wrote:

Pimpscord is the new best character. Not an opinion. FACT.

Somepony needs to draw Pimpscord RIGHT THE HELL NAO.

…if that's okay with you, I mean.

Skeletor-sm

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