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KYM Pony General VIII: One Pony Away From a Cease and Desist

Last posted May 19, 2022 at 09:55PM EDT. Added Jul 06, 2014 at 11:32AM EDT
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There's a rather glaring omission from these maps though, none of them include the Wrong Neighborhood…

Oh, and also…
Baluh said:


@CrashGordon94
Happy Birthday!

Thank you very much!
Sorry that I didn't respond when it was timely…

…Maybe it's too late but until earlier today I lost track of that post in the shuffle of the polygamy argument and I wouldn't feel right letting it completely slip by.

EDIT: Wait, hold on, THIS started the new page?!

Last edited Dec 22, 2014 at 02:49PM EST

FimFiction has gone through another update again. Gone are the random banners on top of the site. Instead, names of the users on top each fanfics are shown instead.

<a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/220615/twilight-manages-to-screw-up-more-than-usual">Here's an example.

Also, I have decided on the next long fanfic that I will read, which is <a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122954/hail-to-the-king">Hail to the King. If you did not already know, there was a post where I was cheering so loudly about a particular author returning to FimFiction after a looooooooooong hiatus. I am going to read the story up to the point where the story was last written and see how it goes.

Blue Yoshi wrote:

FimFiction has gone through another update again. Gone are the random banners on top of the site. Instead, names of the users on top each fanfics are shown instead.

<a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/220615/twilight-manages-to-screw-up-more-than-usual">Here's an example.

Also, I have decided on the next long fanfic that I will read, which is <a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122954/hail-to-the-king">Hail to the King. If you did not already know, there was a post where I was cheering so loudly about a particular author returning to FimFiction after a looooooooooong hiatus. I am going to read the story up to the point where the story was last written and see how it goes.

I AM SO FUCKING CONFUSED Seriously, FiMFiction has more trouble sticking with one design than the Oregon Ducks football program.

@Fimfiction
That's Knighty for you. Personally, I think removing the banners is shit and makes the pages seem really cluttered, but he simply has to use that space on non-aesthetics. Makes me think eventually the front page will just be walls of text.

In other shitstorm news, the Twilight's Library group has shut down thanks to drama. and to think it all started because a fanfic has Dash act like a bitch…

xTSGx wrote:

@Fimfiction
That's Knighty for you. Personally, I think removing the banners is shit and makes the pages seem really cluttered, but he simply has to use that space on non-aesthetics. Makes me think eventually the front page will just be walls of text.

In other shitstorm news, the Twilight's Library group has shut down thanks to drama. and to think it all started because a fanfic has Dash act like a bitch…

Wait, what?! Wow…. Maybe that was the reason why I couldn't add any stories in that group for a while.

CrashGordon94 wrote:

Jimmy said:

Oregon Ducks football program

OP has an American Football team?

(I don't even know if this joke works at all, but I couldn't resist)

I don't know but I hope they have bonus ducks in case of emergency.

@Maps

What the hell is the Lynx?

Wightprincess wrote:

You crazy mofo, I hardly ever posted here even when I wasn't deactivated!

Okay, fine, I missed you too.

Just a quick hug. No butt touches.

But Owens…

We're all butts here…

You cannot avoid the butt touches when everything is butt touches!


@Erin


<div class=spoiler title="Are we still posting high art?">

I didn't even know that 'scenery porn' was a tag, but I love it:


And the greatest art of this century:


And how about some random Christmas cuteness?


@Doctor
A lynx is a wild cat, along the lines of a bobcat.
In fact, Daring Do fought one (the guy on the right with the short tail):

Last edited Dec 23, 2014 at 05:03AM EST

Blue Yoshi's fanfic reading adventure update:

Currently reading chapter two of the long fanfic <a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122954/hail-to-the-king">Hail to the King. So far, I'm loving it. A LOT. Here's what I know so far:

Chapter one:

The story starts off with a human spirit describing his slow trip to the Heaven after dying in the human world. The cause of his death is unknown, however. But before he is about to reach the Heaven, a shadowy spirit of King Sombra denies the human soul of his entry to the Heaven, only because Sombra wants to touch the Heaven's pearly stair steps. The image of Heaven disappears as Sombra touches the stairs, and the soul screams out in fury. The human, meanwhile, falls to the shadowy void….

(Note: The story is written from the main character's point of view. The main character does not have a name yet, so I'll refer to him as the "main character".)

The main character wakes to find that he is reborn as King Sombra, but does not know about it until later in the story. He thinks everything he sees is some sort of dream and that he is in a coma…a really good coma or a lucid dream. He tests out his powers by using the dark crystals as a mode of transportation, approaches the Crystal Empire, and scares the townsfolk. Main character then tries to fix the situation by getting rid of the black crystal towers he created to ride his way to the Crystal Empire, only to shatter the crystal to a thousand pieces and ruin the Empire.

Shining Armor and Princess Cadance find that Sombra has returned. They try to stop Sombra, unaware of the fact that the real Sombra is dead and that the Sombra they see is actually a human being. They use the Crystal Heart to try and kill the main character, only to find that it doesn't work. Instead, it makes the main character all shiny and happy inside. The ponies stare at the main character in utter shock as the main character tries to explain who the heck Sombra is and why he is being attacked for no reason.

Chapter two:

Main character is placed inside a crystal prison with a muzzle around his mouth and a straitjacket to restrain him. He tries to get Shining and Cadance's attention, but to no avail. He finally succeeds when he asks if Cadance is his daughter. Shining and Cadance think Sombra is behaving strangely, so Cadance decides to interrogate him using a lie detector jewel while Shining tries to calm the group.

While Shining is doing his job, Cadance interrogates the main character and gets crazy answers out of him, especially about the part where the main character thinks he and Shining have a Darth and Luke relationship. The main character explains everything to Cadance while the lie detector jewel confirms that many of the stuff the character is saying is true. Cadance is bombarded by all of the information that the main character is spilling out of his mouth.

After the interrogation, Cadance tells Shining that she had an awful time with the (fake) Sombra and that Sombra has completely lost his mind. She says that Sombra claims to be a human being and that magic doesn't exist in the world he is coming from, which is true, much to Cadance's chagrin. She has no idea what human beings are, why magic doesn't exist in their world, and if there really is a human world. They laugh about all the "silly stuff" that the main character was talking about, until a crystal pony tells them Sombra was trying to escape.

(There's still more in the second chapter, but that's all I know for now.)

Whoever wrote this fanfic seems to be a genius at writing, because he was using advanced vocabulary and had near-perfect grammar and spelling. The story has fluid transition, the scenes are explained in every detail, and the flow of the story is at a decent and constant pace. It's one of the best written MLP fanfictions I have ever read so far.

Last edited Dec 23, 2014 at 03:12PM EST

Oh my goodness! I am dying of laughter here! I just finished chapter 2 of "Hail to the King", and I laughed so much that I had to stop reading the story several times to catch my breath! The guy who wrote the fanfic is a comedy genius!

Basically, this is what happened for the rest of the chapter:

Main character breaks out of his cell out of boredom. One guard runs away to get help, while the other stays behind and does not do anything other than stare at (fake) Sombra. Main character breaks through the walls with his magic beam powers and yells "FREEEEEEDOM!!!!!" to the open air, but turns around because he forgot his cape and armor.

Shining Armor and Cadance find the main character trying to fit the armor inside his body. He is quickly encased around in a magical bubble as he tries to escape again after realizing that he can go into his shadow form. He tries to break the bubble with his magic, but the bubble does not budge. Instead, the magic causes the whole area around it to become filled with smoke (which is made up of his now shadowy body), blinding the main character and making him shout random stuff into the air ("WHO TURNED OUT THE LIGHTS?!" "Did I just inhale part of myself?", etc.)

Cadance said that they sent a letter to Celestia and Luna, but they won't arrive until a few hours later. So, they're stuck with a guy who is not really King Sombra but a hyper-evolved, futuristic, thunder-monkey…I mean, a human from some world they don't know whether it exists or not.

Oh yeah. And the lie detector jewel? I like that thing. That thing should appear in the later parts of the fanfic. I'm reading the interrogation part again, because that part was freaking hilarious.

BTW, the story is also the highest-rated MLP fanfic under the category "Human" in FimFiction.

Last edited Dec 23, 2014 at 04:55PM EST

Right… Its about time for me to abandon my computer for a couple of days to take a trip to the burning plains of farmland in the middle of nowhere… All just to celebrate an Australian X-mas!

Anyone who knows me can tell I'm not looking forward to this… Those that know me too well will also know that there's a good chance that it will alternate between being unbearably uncomfortable from the heat, sun and allergies… and unbearably heart-breaking when I meet up once more with the one person that reminds me I'm not aromantic… Yet I can never be with.

Wait… I didn't want to say all that here… What I wanted to leave you with was a question I've been stewing over.

How far back in Equestria's history would one have to go to find one of those "lost civilization" style times where even Earth ponies wield powerful magics and control advanced technologies?

Personally, based purely on what little the MLP verse says so far… All the ancient events in MLP happened around the 1000 years ago mark. So as far as I can tell, a lost and yet very advanced civilization could have reached its peak and then crumbled possibly a thousand years before that, giving a thousand years between then and the "Hearths Warming" period to have their ruins buried.

Its obvious I'm asking for "fan fic" reasons, in which I could do whatever I want… I'm just wondering if it sounds a believable amount of time.

For everyone not interested in this question… Merry X-mas.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! <a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122954/hail-to-the-king">"Hail to the King" is sooooooo hilarious and so well-written! I took down notes while reading the hilarious fanfic for the third chapter so that you guys can see what I read. Spoiler below!

<div class = "spoiler" title = "Chapter 3">
-Main character/fake King Sombra is forced to work with Shining Armor to restore the ruined buildings of the Crystal Empire to its normal state, with Shining acting like a paranoid jerk (he was trapping the main character with a force field whenever he did something that seemed suspicious).
-Enter Celestia and Luna, with Luna going ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE all over to find Sombra after teleporting to the palace's interior. Cadance explains the situation and tells her husband to retrieve Sombra.
-Sombra greets Celestia and Luna awkwardly and is still unaware of all of the stuff happening around him. (Keep in mind that the main character still thinks that he is in a coma.)
-Dinner time! Celestia asks the main character about stuff about their history and "memory loss", but the main character says that he doesn't know anything about that and that he's not who they think he is.
-Other ponies still don't believe him, thinking that he's totally lost his mind, or his "memory loss" is worse than they thought.
-Conversation takes an awkward turn when main character says stuff about ponies on Earth (or Earth-ponies, as he describes them) and how they're nothing like the ponies he sees in Equestria.
-The princesses misunderstand fake Sombra's words and are horrified at the implications (especially the part about Earth-ponies used as livestock). The ponies tell Celestia that fake Sombra needs to be banished. Until…
-…fake Sombra mentions the planet "Earth." Celestia uses her spell to see if fake Sombra is telling the truth. When fake Sombra tells her the information, Celestia is perplexed. Luna powers down the magic beam that she was charging to fire at fake Sombra in case things got outta hand.
-Main character tries to prove that this whole thing is a dream by launching a butter knife on the table into the air, letting it fall,…AND LETTING IT STAB HIS FORELEG!!!!!!!!
-Fake Sombra runs around the room, screaming in pain, while he sprays blood all over the place! Eventually, the ponies manage to get the knife out of his wound, but not before he sprays blood all over the place.
-The ponies explain to fake Sombra that this whole thing is not a dream. Dazed and hurt, fake Sombra tries to ask the ponies about various weird MLP logic, including: holding stuff with a single hoof and flying around with tiny wings. The princesses say that most of the stuff was because of magic. Main character is still confused.
-Main character is still awestruck and even calls Celestia a "fatty". Shining, Cadance, and Luna decide to seize the main character and banish him, but Celestia tells them to stop. Apparently, Celestia's the only one who has been able to contain her composure throughout the awkward scene.
-Main character passes out due to Shining strangling him. He is carried away to the infirmary to have his foreleg bandaged, with Celestia pondering about what Sombra told him during dinner.
-The other ponies ask Celestia what they can do with Sombra. She answers that she has no idea what to do, because the situation is unique to her.
-Cadance enters the infirmary with Sombra in it. She calls out to Sombra. Main character wakes up and tells Cadance that he'll be the good version of King Sombra. He has decided that the world he is in is real as well.
-Cadance reveals the horrible history about the real Sombra to the fake Sombra. Fake Sombra/main character bashes his head against the side in frustration when he hears the stories, especially about the part where the real Sombra scared Spike by making him see illusions of his worst nightmares. He cannot believe that he is inside the body of a ruthless tyrant and one of the most hated beings in Equestria.
-Meanwhile, Luna, Shining, and Celestia discuss about what to do with Sombra. They discuss about his "lost memories" and how it may have happened until they hear a voice inside the infirmary.
-Celestia and the two other ponies teleport and listen to fake Sombra's speech about how he realized that his goal is to fix the Crystal Empire and undo the damage that the real Sombra did.
-Main character escapes the infirmary by using his shadowy magic. The other ponies chase after him to the balcony but cannot find him.
-Main character uses the damaged palace wall he destroyed earlier in chapter 2 to announce to the crystal ponies that he has changed. He says that he's a "space alien" and that he is possessing Sombra's body to do the opposite of the stuff he did. Apparently, the main character believes that his new purpose in life as a human soul in Sombra's body is to be a nice king unlike the real Sombra.
-“I am King Sombra, and you’re gonna love me!”
-Celestia tells the princesses to watch and hear the fake Sombra deliver his unusual speech. Shining chases after him and tries to pull the fake Sombra out from the palace hole with the crystal ponies watching him in confused silence.
-“Mark my words! This day signifies the advent of a new era for this city. We’re gonna be in the history books, people! From now on, I, ruler of the Crystal Empire and history’s greatest monster, shall be the best king who ever lived!”
-And right then, the main character/fake Sombra gets a cutie mark. We don't know what it is, though.
-Both Shining and Sombra tumble back to the palace awkwardly, with Shining telling Sombra that he "hates him so much." The princesses are confused by the horrible speech, but Celestia seemed to be delighted. She thinks Sombra can be redeemed.
-Celestia turns to the other ponies and tells them about the things they did wrong and how they should avoid it in the future. Sombra looks after the crowd, who still look at him with confused expression.
-Before Celestia decides to leave, she tells the main character that Shining and Cadance will be spending the night in the palace by themselves. Sombra will be spending a night with Luna.

Last edited Dec 24, 2014 at 01:05AM EST

(cont'd from my previous post, because it was reeeeeeeeealllly long)

Author also wrote a deleted scene for the chapter.

<div class = "spoiler" title = "Deleted scene in Chapter 3">
Luna had an idea. There was very little known about King Sombra, but it was understood that every action he made was to grant himself more power. He lived for one purpose: to conquer. She knew his type. They were only happy when their enemies were crushed and driven before them. If his personality still existed, then a challenge to his arrogance would bring it out.
“King Sombra,” she began. “You wish for us to trust you, but you still refer to yourself as king. Does this not signify ambition for the throne? ‘Tis sedition at the very least. If you wish to put our fears at ease, and honestly mean us no harm, then we require a token of submission. A sign of good faith, if you will.” She considered for a moment what to do before the corner of her mouth rose complacently. “Remove thy crown.”
They wanted my crown? Was she serious? Aw, man, but I really liked that thing. Feeling surprisingly protective of my headgear, I put a hoof over it in case they tried to snatch it off me.
Shining Armor’s eyes narrowed. “You’re hesitating.” As far as he was concerned, any indications of Sombra’s previous personality – in this case his desire to rule – was enough cause to prepare for a fight.
“Do I really have to?” I asked. Their firm expressions told me everything I needed to know, so I sighed in disappointment. “Fine, here you go.” Relenting, I tried to slip it off.
Well, tried to, at least. “Hmm?” Unfortunately, the thing was stuck on my head pretty well. An experimental yank accomplished nothing beyond pulling my hair.
“We’re waiting, Sombra.” Any one of them could have said that.
“I’m trying. It’s just…” Another tug. “Hold on. Just give me a minute.”
What the heck, was it glued to my skull? It certainly felt like it. “Hrrrrrrrng!” Both hooves under the base of the crown, I shoved as hard as I could. “Ow! Man, that’s stuck.”
The crown didn’t even have enough leeway to wiggle it back and forth until it came loose. “Grrrrk! NNNGH!” I struggled. Attempting, short rapid-fire pushes failed to budge it even slightly. “Hrnt! Grnt! Hrnt! Oh, for crying out loud! HRRRRRRRRRRRRNNNNGGGH!”
Cadence suddenly found her meal incredibly interesting and Luna stared out of the closest window. They both had the same thought, but neither could admit it out loud; the more Sombra strained, the more he sounded like he was having a difficult time in the bathroom.
“HNNNNGH!” I grunted. “It just won’t go!”
Leaving the table, I angled my head to the floor and resumed my battle. Hopefully, gravity would help remove this thing. “GET. OFF! When that didn’t work, I curled into a ball and pressed with all four hooves.
Luna had regrets. “Um… nevermind, you can stop now,” she offered.
“No, I totally got this.” My voice brimmed with determination.
The fact that I had an audience of royalty – consisting of a high queen, a prince-general, the mistress of this very palace, and also Luna – no longer mattered to me. It was like those times when you just couldn’t open a pickle jar. At a certain point, you no longer cared about the pickles and just wanted to defeat the insolent thing.
“Hrrrrrrrr… It’s moving! I can feel it!” Almost there. Come on, almost there. “GrrrrrrAAAAH! Got it!”
With one final push, the firmly adhered crown popped off my head. It flew across the dining hall in a long arc, bouncing with several metallic clangs until it rattled to a stop like a lost hubcap. “There!” I boasted. “You happy now?”
I cheerfully trotted back to my seat, sporting the smuggest, most victorious grin possible. Take that, Luna.
Cadence, who was taking a bite of her food when the crown sprung off, took one look at me and choked. “That!” she coughed, “that was part of the crown!?” Even as she pounded her chest to clear her airways, she never stopped staring at me with obvious astonishment.
“Wha?” Perplexed, I crossed my eyes to see what she was gawking at and immediately saw the issue. Taking off my crown revealed that the tall, red spike on top of my head was really a protective sleeve for a normal, grey unicorn horn of roughly the same dimensions.
“Huh.” I was just as surprised as everyone else by the revelation. “Well, would’ja look at that. Who knew?” I then rubbed a hoof along the horn, trying to picture its size and shape and sincerely hoping it was bigger than average. The black facial protection was also part of the crown, so the sideburn-like protrusions and snout-armor no longer adorned my face. Nothing was left but dark grey fur and a mop of black hair.
“You almost look… normal,” Cadence said hesitantly. There was no hiding how disturbed she was. Monsters were supposed to look like monsters, and the fact that Sombra could look like anypony else was not a welcome realization. Other than his distinctive clothing, especially that cape he seemed so fond of, the only difference between him and any given unicorn was his sharp canines. Her stomach churned at the thought that he could blend in with a crowd just by closing his mouth.
“Really?” I smiled happily. “That’s great news! I should’ve taken that thing off a long time ago.”
Or not. Cadence took some solace in the fact that Sombra’s nonstop prattling and omnipresent grin meant that he’d never keep his mouth closed long enough to remain undetected.
But it wasn’t much of a comfort.

And that's it for the fanfic so far. The last time the author posted in his page, he said that the current chapter that he is working on is 25,000 words long. I hope he releases it soon and continues this wonderful story, because I love every part of the story!

So, been drawing a bunch of OCs lately, working with a skill generator from Strolen and Paletton. I'm not going to link all of them, just some of my favorites. Still experimenting with the layouts of these things. These are in no particular order, but Moon Runner is the most recent one I drew.

Last edited Dec 24, 2014 at 01:14AM EST

Merry Christmas, although ours was yesterday. Anyway this is my gift to all you lovely people.

Last edited Dec 25, 2014 at 08:09PM EST

Blue Yoshi's fanfic reading update: (no major spoilers in this one)

After taking a short break in reading, I have decided to read <a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/211404/what-ive-become">"What I've Become". I've only skimmed the story a while ago to find out what it is about and decided to read it later. It's another "Human in Equestria" fanfic with an interesting twist: the main character was kidnapped by some extra-terrestrials, experimented on, became a mutant-humanoid creature, and somehow ended up in Equestria. I don't know much else about the story, but I'm going to read the story instead of skimming it to see how the story's like.

Once again, I will take notes and use the spoiler tags to hide the notes.

Lunar Protege said:

How far back in Equestria’s history would one have to go to find one of those “lost civilization” style times where even Earth ponies wield powerful magics and control advanced technologies?

Realistically, only a few hundred years prior to Hearth's Warming Eve. Rome went from being the most powerful empire on earth, to not even being able to stop German barbarians from burning their capitol and killing their emperor in only about 400 years.

All the ancient events in MLP happened around the 1000 years ago mark…

Only NMM and Sombra happened around a 1000 years ago. No date is given for Tirek, Discord, or Hearths Warming Eve. Presumably, Discord happened a while before NMM as Celestia and Luna were well established as diarchs (capitol city, dealing with Sombra, etc.) by the time NMM happened.

xTSGx wrote:

Lunar Protege said:

How far back in Equestria’s history would one have to go to find one of those “lost civilization” style times where even Earth ponies wield powerful magics and control advanced technologies?

Realistically, only a few hundred years prior to Hearth's Warming Eve. Rome went from being the most powerful empire on earth, to not even being able to stop German barbarians from burning their capitol and killing their emperor in only about 400 years.

All the ancient events in MLP happened around the 1000 years ago mark…

Only NMM and Sombra happened around a 1000 years ago. No date is given for Tirek, Discord, or Hearths Warming Eve. Presumably, Discord happened a while before NMM as Celestia and Luna were well established as diarchs (capitol city, dealing with Sombra, etc.) by the time NMM happened.

For some reason I figure that although I can't tell how long between Tirek and Sombra… I think that the Time between HWE and Tirek has to be less than 100 years considering the presence of Starswirl in both stories.

I'm not certain as to whether it was said that Celestia were or were not royalty by the time Tirek happened… But with it it wasn't mentioned, I'll assume they were… Which would put the timeline as HWE then Discord then Tirek (in the space of 100 years).

That's about as far as I guessed. For some reason though, playing it by ear I figure that they could by spread out as far as 500 years from the very beginning of the HWE story (which admittedly could be 100 years before the end of the HWE story) to NMM.

Mainly since for the moment it feels most comfortable to spread out Tirek and Sombra by about a 100 years assuming nothing happened between those periods, and 200 years if something did happen between them. With Sombra and NMM probably being separated by less than 100.

Again… Playing it by ear here.

Since you say Rome fell in 400 years… That might actually make it possible to squeeze in the fall of an empire at the "2000 years ago" mark.

… Maybe.


Well, with X-mas/Hearths-Warming-Eve gone, we prepare to say goodbye to the year of the Horse, and usher in the year of the sheep. And with that… Sheep!

@Year of the Sheep

Chinese New Year isn't until February 19 this year, so we still have a little bit of time. The year of Luigi The Horse lives on.

Though, going by the memes, it still felt more like the year of the goat.

It's actually possible NMM and Sombra were within a year: Imagine- Luna and Celestia beta the crap out of Sombra, but Luna is still relatively ignored- it could easily have been the last straw- especially since it would have been a difficult fight, if what happened on Sombra's return is any indication- and Luna lost her temper- or a spell by Sombra did something- or she got possessed by something- and became NMM.

<a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/211404/what-ive-become">This is quite an intriguing story. I got into it three chapters in, but the last couple of chapters have gripped my attention. No wonder this story and its sequel are very popular on FimFiction. Just like what I did for "Hail to the King", I will tell you guys what I have read for each of the chapters and put it under the spoiler tag.

Chapter 1:

-Main character is some sort of mutant-humanoid creature. He hunts down and kills a large pig in White Tail Woods.
-Meanwhile, Carrot Top trots through the Woods and finds the predator hunting down the pig. The story describes the predator (the main character) as:
Five to six feet tall. Gorilla-like look, except it was bald, gaunt, and sickly looking. Pallid flesh with a slimy sheen to it. Very thin. Blade-like spikes burst from its back along its spine. Long, spindly limbs ended in a five-toed claw, with its fore claws being much longer and sharper-looking. (Partially taken from the story)
The main character also had "lidless eyes which were pools of ebony; no nose, rather just a hole in the center of its face; and had lip-less maw which sported two rows of interlocking, inch long fangs." (also partially taken from the story)
-Carrot Top tries to run away, but runs into a tree right behind her!
-Main character picks up Carrot Top who knocked herself out by that tree and out of the woods.

Chapter 2:

-A stallion named Written Script trots out of the restaurant, thinking about his surprise plans with Carrot Top. He hears a howl from White Tail Woods.
-The time is mid-afternoon, according to the story. The main character has lived close to the Woods for the past six months. He sets Carrot Top down in the middle of the clearing and out of the Woods, but realizes that his hands are covered in pig's blood, which has ended up on the mare.
-"Alien abduction"? Hmm…. So this main character guy WAS taken away by the aliens after all!
-It turns out that the main character was the one who made the howling sound. Or specifically, a howl-shrieking sound. Then the main character runs back into the woods.
-Written Script sees Carrot Top lying in front of the Woods. Rainbow Dash suddenly appears and suggests that they should take Carrot Top to the Ponyville Hospital. That noise the main character has made allowed the residents of the town to recognize his presence….

Chapter 3:

-Main character returns to his home, which is a cave 15 feet above the ground. He decides to fish after a scavenger stole his previous meal.
-Carrot Top is lying down in the hospital with Written Script and Caramel watching her. She wakes up and shares a conversation about the anniversary that Written had planned for tonight and the monster in the Woods. Written then says that Twilight wants to talk to Carrot after she woke up.
-Scene cuts Canterlot Castle, with Celestia looking at reports about an alien craft crashing near the White Tail Woods six months ago. The survivors of the crash were quadrupedal insectoid aliens and ape-like creatures wearing collars and devices inserted into the creatures' brain. Only a few remained before they all eventually died.
-Luna enters Celestia's room and tells her to lower the sun and go to sleep, because Tia had been up multiple days without sleep while poring over reports about the crash site. Celestia does what Luna tells her after receiving the letter from Twilight.
-Luna reads the letter that Twilight sent to her older sister and quickly tells the Solar Guards to gather the Night Guards to find the mysterious creature living in the Woods.

Chapter 4: (This is the part where it gets REALLY interesting, and the part that fully gripped my attention)

-Main character catches a fish in the river and returns home. He hears something approaching.
-Luna is led by a couple of Night Guards who are trying to find the mysterious creature. Luna flies away to let the Guards investigate.
-The Guards find the cave filled with animal hides but do not find the creature in there. Luna is told that the cave is clear. The princess tells the ponies to continue investigating while she tries to reach for the creature's dreams and see what they are like.
-Luna feels a ton of emotions-pain, sadness, loss, guilt-within the dreamscape, which are most likely belonging to the main character. Something is terribly wrong….

Chapter 5:

-Main character is spotted by the Night Guards. He turns and runs away from his lair and abandons his meal. We also know that the language the character speaks and the language the ponies speak are different, though the story translates them both into English.
-Night Guards find out that the main character has been collecting animal hides to make clothing, but has no idea how to do so.
-Main character is still running away from the two unicorn ponies chasing after him. He manages to cut the chase with a distraction and makes his escape by swimming across a river and emerging on the other side.
-Main character is cold, hungry, and sorrowful, afraid that he would die alone and that he would never see his girlfriend or his real home ever again. He falls asleep afterwards.
-Luna rejoins the Guards who failed to catch the main character. She realizes that the nightmare she was analyzing is slowly fading, because the main character is slowly losing consciousness and strength! Hurry, Luna!

This is all I have to say for now. More notes coming up in the next five chapters.

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(cont'd from my previous post)

To get you guys an idea of how the main character looks like, think of The Rake. A lot of people on Fimfiction mentioned this when they were trying to visualize how the main character looked like.

Chapter 6:

-We find out that the main character is having a nightmare, and wow! It's quite disturbing! It shows the main character's experiences when he was captured by Them (the aliens are referred to as "They", "Them", etc. with the first letter capitalized).
-Looks like the aliens have not only turned the main character into a mutant, but they also made him a monster who will kill anything on sight.
-The nightmare dissipates, and Luna arrives to approach the main character. She comforts him and tells him to go to sleep.
-The ponies have arrived just in time to save the guy from possible death from hypothermia. Luna explains the stuff that she saw in the nightmare and that the main character sees himself as a monster. He is afraid that if he was captured, he would be killed and dissected for experimentation.
-Luna decides that they should take him back to his cave instead of Canterlot directly (smart thinking there, Luna!) since he does not trust the ponies completely. They also leave him with cooking tools and a fish fillet for food, and a ladder to allow the main character an easier access to his cave.
-Along with the tools described above, main character also finds a note with a caricature of him and two winged unicorns. The figure in the note seems to be shaking the hoof of the larger one.

Chapter 7:

-What's this? An extra-terrestrial being wandering the space? It seemed to receive a transmission signal, but we don't know much about its purpose of the story yet….
-Back in Canterlot Castle, Luna tells Celestia about the creature living near White Tail Woods and the events that took place yesterday. She also said that the creature she was one of the ape-creatures that came from the spaceship six months ago.
-Carrot meets Written. They both talk about the strange stuff that happened yesterday. They both think the creature is sapient and decide to give present the creature with a box of cupcakes to see how it would respond.
-Main character smells baked goods from far away, comes out of his lair, and walks through the Woods to see where the scent of the baked goods are coming from.
-Written and Carrot walk through the Woods. They encounter the creature, who is cautiously approaching them.

Chapter 8:

-Carrot Top offers the main character a box of cupcakes while the Night Guards watch the main character from above. The cupcakes have pictures that show Pinkie Pie greeting the main character and her becoming friends (or something like that) in a chronological order.
-Main character offers the two ponies a pair of cupcakes as a sign of thanks. He also draws a picture of himself giving a thumbs up to them as well. Afterwards, he draws a picture of himself and a pony in front of him, with a pony saying something.
-Written tries to translate what the text in the picture says. The translation is: "I do not understand what you are speaking to me." (Keep in mind that human language and pony language in the fanfic are different)
-Next thing the main character writes translates as: "My name is Defender of People." It's actually four letters which comprises of the main character's name. The two ponies decide to call him "Defender".
-Back in Canterlot Castle, Luna tells more stuff about the creature to Celestia and how it would refuse to attack others due to its disturbing past.
-At Sugarcube Corner, Pinkie Pie prepares a welcome party for the main character when he arrives.
-According to the author, the main character's name is Alexander (Alex for short), which means "Defender of Man".

Chapter 9: (This chapter gave me feels of joy)

-More translations from Alex to pony language: "My shape not shape", and "I monster, not monster. Real monster bring me here."
-Night Guard from above flies down and tells the two ponies that the princesses would like to speak to them.
-Evening approaches, and Alex is back in his lair and has finally learned how to make pants! And he wears them, because he doesn't like to walk around naked. He also stares at the tiny pictures on the cupcakes, thinking it must be some sort of message about a party invitation.
-At Sugarcube Corner, Pinkie Pie has invited other ponies to the party, but everypony except Pinkie is confused at what is going on. Everypony hears a scream, and we see that Mrs. Cake had seen the monster (Alex) running off to another direction.
-Alex runs into an alley and bumps into Pinkie Pie who tries to hug him. Alex continues running away, with doubt filling his mind.
-Pinkie finally finds Alex, but she looks sad. She finally approaches him and hugs him at last. Alex weeps tears of joy while the other ponies watch him. Fluttershy joins in the embrace, and the chapter ends with Alex hugging both ponies at the same time.

Chapter 10:

-Carrot Top and Written Script arrive in Canterlot, but Written is overwhelmed by the princesses' presence and passes out. He is carried out to recover while Carrot explains what happened in the previous few chapters.
-Alex looks around and sees that the mane six has approached. Rainbow Dash and Applejack look at him distrustingly; Rarity looks at Alex's pants in disgust; Twilight looks at Alex curiously.
-Twilight casts a translation spell to Alex. It works, sort of…. To the ponies, it seems as if Alex is speaking in various grumbles and screams. His voice has been distorted by the aliens, too….
-Alex agrees to have a small talk with the mane six after Twilight uses the spell on her friends. Conversation involves Alex saying stuff about how he was afraid to reach out to the citizens of Ponyville and that he had a strong desire to live until fate arrived.
-Conversation goes pretty well over all, and Alex goes back to his lair afterwards, leaving the mane six to wonder what happened to him in the past. Also, the mane six calls him "Defender" as well.

In these chapters, Alex gives nicknames to various ponies based on their cutie marks. The names are:

Carrot Top- Carrot
Written Script- Scroll
Pinkie Pie- The Pink One
Fluttershy- Butterfly
Twilight Sparkle- Star

Next up, it's the last four chapters and an epilogue of "What I've Become".

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Well @Windigo, there's only one way, either start to read a book, Fantasy or Sci-Fi, or start to watch a series, an Anime for example or anything, or the 3rd option, play lot of video games, but basically you have to think about something else, and you will see those months gettin' away in a moment, just don't forget to post here frequently or otherwise you will forgot to watch the new episodes.

Windigo With Salad wrote:

GWAAAAAAAAA!

I can't handle this break. I thought I could, but I can't. The fact that I need to wait months for a new episode is driving we up the wall.
Any suggestions on how to get my pony fix?

Read Fallout: Equestria and its side-stories. ALL of its side-stories.

Windigo With Salad wrote:

GWAAAAAAAAA!

I can't handle this break. I thought I could, but I can't. The fact that I need to wait months for a new episode is driving we up the wall.
Any suggestions on how to get my pony fix?

I just keep tabs on all the pony artwork. There's always a constant stream.

But that's if you are an artwork fan

@Lunar Protege: Though of course the horses keep the sheep locked in and they herd them, heh, instead of just asking like they should.

@DeadParrot's gif: Ew, you can be Lisa's.

@Windigo with salad
As the others have said, the fandom still produces a lot of content during the hiatus. If fanfics and fanart aren't your thing/enough, you can try fangames and YouTube videos/animations (i'm subscribed to over 400 channels, i need help) .

There is also the IDW comics, those are hit and miss (they made some weird mistakes recently) but overall good.

At last, I'm done reading <a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/211404/what-ive-become">"What I've Become! And wow, it was amazing! I'm definitely gonna read the sequel afterwards.

Chapter 11:

-Carrot Top leaves after talking with the princesses. A Night Guard appears, saying that Alex has been injured on his way back to his lair!
-Alex settles in the hot spring inside his cave to relax after chatting with the ponies. He wakes up and finds that something feels off….
-Oh no! Alex is being attacked by the aliens who have abducted him! Alex strikes back and kills some of them. One of them manages to fire a laser gun at Alex's back, and he goes tumbling out of his lair and into the creek below due to the impact.
-The alien who shot him is killed by one Night Guard/bat pony. Another alien is killed by another Night Guard. The Guards retrieve Alex and take him to the infirmary.
-Back at Canterlot Castle, the Guards describe the injury as if Alex was hit by Dragonfire. The princesses tell the Guards to stay on high alert.

Chapter 12:

-We find out that the alien race that kidnapped Alex is known as the "Krin". The characters introduced in this chapter are: Lieutenant Talian, Captain Hazalk, Sergeant Inaz, and Agent Ilisk.
-The Captain seems to be ordering things around to find Alex (known as Subject-38 to them), while the others communicate with the captain and report information to him. Apparently, this scene takes place in Chapter 11, where the aliens attempt to capture Alex.
-Unfortunately, the captain seems to be hesitant with the plan after looking at the information on Alex….
-We see the attack that took place on in Chapter 11 from the alien's point of view. Sergeant and the rest of his team are eventually killed by Alex and the ponies who rescue him. Hazalk is shocked at the outcome while Talian is wondering what in the world happened. Captain decides to conduct a meeting with Ilisk afterwards.
-Back in Canterlot Castle, the doctors and nurses are taking care of Alex. To their surprise, they discover two DNA samples inside his body.
-The princesses arrive in the infirmary and tell them to use a regenerative spell to heal Alex.

Chapter 13:

-Ah-ha! Captain Hazalk WAS ordered to capture Alex upon the agent's request. He questions Agent Ilisk about the purpose of the mission and why the agent did not warn the captain about Alex's sapience.
-Ilisk explains that Subject-38 and other mutants were created to become the ultimate killing machines. The experiment was not a success due to the mutants unwilling to obey the aliens' commands. Seeing how Ilisk is keeping his plans a secret to the alien government, Hazalk arrests him for "war crimes and and for being an accomplice to this entire affair."
-Ilisk shoots Hazalk while the captain has his back turned towards him. The agent, however, is carried away by the captain's troops who have eavesdropped the whole conversation. The captain also tells his troops to get the medical staff ready to treat his wounds.
-Alex wakes up a couple of times while the regeneration spell is being used on him. The third time he wakes up, the procedure is nearly done, but he is strapped to the bed. Alex has returned mostly to his normal human self, but his vision and hearing are dim.
-Princess Luna enters the infirmary and uses the translation spell to explain that when the ponies used the regeneration spell on him, some of the body parts on Alex were foreign and did not respond to the spell. So, they had to cut away some of the mutant body parts and replace them with another body part. They also removed the alien DNA from his body, too, but the procedure's not completely done yet.
-During the process, however, his own body started to attack the foreign limbs on his body, especially his arms and legs. The procedure could kill him if things go wrong, but Alex is thankful that he is slowing returning to normal.
-Both Luna and Alex exchange their names, and Alex is able to smile after many long months (his facial muscles have returned thanks to the spell).

Chapter 14:

-Luna exits and tells a nurse that Alex is doing fine.
-Celestia deals with Blueblood who is nagging about tax exceptions. After the annoying prince is sent away, Luna enters and tells Celestia about her conversation with Alex.
-Luna tells Celestia about the world that Alex lives in based on the limited information she got from Alex. Celestia is quite surprised about the information along with Luna. They are hopeful that Alex will do fine once the procedure is over.
-Back at Captain Hazalk's ship, Hazalk proposes that he wants Alex to return to his homeland. He also says that if another known alien race (the Quzin) was to appear, they will have to tell them everything that happened, including Ilisk's conspirations to create killing machines out of innocent human beings.
-Meanwhile, Ilisk seems to be plotting something….

Epilogue:

-Assuming this is the Quzin race, the characters introduced here are: Priestess Akitesh and Jedon (Akitesh's Second Voice/advisor).
-Jedon has said that a Krin science vessel has "issued a distress signal from near the planet Euti," also known as Equestria. Apparently, they're doing it after the failed mission to capture Subject-38/Alex.
-Akitesh looks at her datapad and sees two forms: the large bipedal creatures (not sure if its the Krin…) and the lighter forms (the human-mutants) hunting some alien monsters. The image then changes and shows a wrecked ship with the Krin and the human-mutants crawling out of it. She sees one of the figures crawling out of the ship and sees the figure's face before Jedon snaps her back into attention.
-Akitesh tells Jedon that she needs to tell the crew about what she saw.

So from what I know, the Krin, which are the alien race who were responsible for the kidnapping of the human race, are not completely evil. Agent Ilisk seems to be the main antagonist of the arc, while Captain Hazalk is doing what the agent is telling him to do until he finds out about the truth behind Ilisk's plans. We do not know much about the Quzin, though.

Right now, I'm going to check out <a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/237992/who-is-this-lord-tirek-you-speak-of">"Who is this Lord Tirek You Speak Of?", which reminds me of <a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122954/hail-to-the-king">"Hail to the King" based on the story's description.

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Back again after reading the first chapter of <a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/237992/who-is-this-lord-tirek-you-speak-of">"Who is this Lord Tirek You Speak Of?", and I must say, it looks pretty promising so far.

-Main character (name is Conrad) walks and waits on a sidewalk to cross the street.
-A kid emerges and bounces his ball in the middle of the road. The kid chases after the ball, and Conrad grabs the kid and throws him back at his mom. He gets crushed by a speeding semi-truck afterwards.
-In the dark void, Conrad hears a couple of voices speaking something about Lord Tirek….
-The main character wakes up as Lord Tirek and sees a changeling darting out of view. He hears voices belonging to a pony army, who tries to get away after seeing the main character/Tirek.
-Lieutenant Skyflower, one of the ponies in the cavalry, seems to have other plans, as she tells the army to attack. No one does, and Conrad taunts Skyflower.
-Skyflower attacks by firing magic at her, but Conrad blocks the attack and eats the magic that she used at the main character. Skyflower charges at the main character, but he grabs her and snaps his fingers to make Skyflower wince at the loud sound.
-An army of changelings appear, and the ponies run away. Conrad decides to follow the changelings to the hive and let them take care of Skyflower.

Seems like the story will also have Queen Chrysalis, Discord, and the mane six involved in it in the future, but that's only based on the character tags on the bottom of the story. I am now following this story to see where it goes.

Also, check this out. While I was reading the story, a counter on top appeared, saying that there were 22 other people who were reading the story with me. I never had the counter reach that high before. O_O (The highest it went was 8, which showed up while I was reading "Princess Changeling Rainbow Magic Pants")

<img src = "http://i.imgur.com/YzUrYy0.png">

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Windigo With Salad wrote:

GWAAAAAAAAA!

I can't handle this break. I thought I could, but I can't. The fact that I need to wait months for a new episode is driving we up the wall.
Any suggestions on how to get my pony fix?

At least the people creating Season Five know how we fans feel and are handling the situation with tact and professionalism.

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Nah, who am I kidding?
They're being butts as usual.
Delightfully trollish butts!


As for stuff to do, everyone has made great suggestions.
Derpibooru still has a constant stream of art, new music and stories are coming out all the time, check out the comics for some more 'official' stuff, or you can just play with your toys like I do.

IT'S HERE! IT'S HAPPENING! THE AUTHOR OF <a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122954/hail-to-the-king">"HAIL TO THE KING" HAS POSTED A NEW CHAPTER TONIGHT, WHICH WAS ONE YEAR SINCE THE LAST CHAPTER (chapter 3) WAS POSTED!

YYYYYYYEEEEEAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Edit: Holy crackers! Look at that live reader count! That's 143 people reading the story!

<img src = "http://i.imgur.com/698AOG1.png">

Edit 2: The view count is still going up. I saw it reach 160.

Last edited Dec 28, 2014 at 02:53AM EST

Windigo with salad said:

Any suggestions on how to get my pony fix?

The fanfics are calling.

Or you could take Doctor "KreagerStein" Kori's advice and watch an anime--like the hell that is Pokemon. At ten episodes a day, it'll take you about four month to finish it.

Speaking of fanfics, Knighty's apparently seen the writing on the wall that horsewords will never supply enough shekels to live off of and so has decided to expand Fimfiction into a general fanfiction site. Given the crap fanfiction.net regularly goes through, I can't help but see this like Ferdinand's visit to Serbia in 1914.

xTSGx wrote:

Windigo with salad said:

Any suggestions on how to get my pony fix?

The fanfics are calling.

Or you could take Doctor "KreagerStein" Kori's advice and watch an anime--like the hell that is Pokemon. At ten episodes a day, it'll take you about four month to finish it.

Speaking of fanfics, Knighty's apparently seen the writing on the wall that horsewords will never supply enough shekels to live off of and so has decided to expand Fimfiction into a general fanfiction site. Given the crap fanfiction.net regularly goes through, I can't help but see this like Ferdinand's visit to Serbia in 1914.

Wut? I think there's a lot of pony Fics, not sure why he'd need to Mae the site into a general fic site. Isn't that what FanFiction.net for?

Whew! Finally finished reading the latest chapter of <a href = "http://www.fimfiction.net/story/122954/hail-to-the-king">"Hail to the King"

-It's time for bed, and Luna and the main character have a fight between each other. And it's because they're trying to claim the bigger bed.
-Main character counters Luna's attacks by using logic about the Equestrian government. Luna attacks back with words and pillows. Then she seizes the mattress and a bunch of pillows around her and chucks them at fake Sombra. Cadance is unable to sleep in the other room due to the loud noise.
-Luna has won the pillow fight and has taken all of the pillows and most of the mattresses from the main character. She then takes Sombra's cape since she thinks it also counts as the "spoils of war".
-And then Luna sees Sombra's flank and his cutie mark. Luna dashes out of the room and into Cadance's room to retrieve the other princess. Both Cadance and Luna sneak in front of the room, cast a sleep-inducing spell on fake Sombra (which causes him to fall off of his bed to the ground asleep), and walk inside.
-Fake Sombra's cutie mark as described in the fanfic: "a snowflake-like symbol of the Crystal Empire sitting within the former tyrant’s crown. The crown’s curved spikes framed the Empire’s symbol like the setting of a diamond ring. Behind it, those purple, misty streams that poured from main character's eyes flowed around and astride the mark like the banners of medieval heraldry."
-Unable to decipher the meaning behind the cutie mark, Cadance leaves while Luna enters fake Sombra's dreams.
-Luna sees a bunch of tall buildings/skyscrapers and a large green and bronze statue (The Spirit of Detroit) inside the dream. Then she stares at a stone statue of a large fist…and gets hit by a car while standing in the middle the street. Luna is sent flying into the air and lands face-first into the statue of the fist. Luna is ejected from the dream, confused at what she saw.
-Celestia wakes up and finds a letter written by Sombra in her personal mailbox. It's an apology letter from him. She also finds a bouquet next to the letter. Celestia is skeptical but finds the letter "promising".
-Shining Armor wakes up and sings (Yes, this is not a joke) and wakes his wife up after cutting his song short.
-Breakfast time! And it's not a good one. As soon as fake Sombra starts talking about what happened last night (he heard the two princesses approach him), Cadance leaves with Luna watching him all day.
-Main character enters Cadance's workroom and finds a long list of papers in the "to do" pile. He finds the paper listing the properties damaged in the Crystal Empire, which was caused by the main character himself in chapter 1. Fake Sombra is utterly displeased at the report and decides to fix it. After much convincing, Luna complies, but gives Sombra a warning to not hurt anypony out there.
-Cadance returns to her workroom and finds out that Sombra and Luna are out fixing the city. Both Cadance and Shining panic, thinking of the possible bad events that may occur with Luna and Sombra wandering outside. They both try and call for help.
-Luna and Sombra walk around the city, with the crystal ponies pleased and frightened at the same time. Sombra mentions briefly about running someone over in his dream (which happened to be Luna!). Meanwhile, Shining Armor gets his troops ready to capture Sombra.
-Luna and Sombra approach a house and enter it, only to find that the house contains an effigy of Sombra along with torches, gallows, and…uh-oh. The crystal pony chases fake Sombra around the house until he summons up a black crystal to partially cover the room's entrance.
-Luna forces the crystal pony and fake Sombra to get along. Both of them oblige, but Sombra is literally kicked out of the house afterwards. He lands in the middle of the crowd of crystal ponies. One of them kicks a ball at him (it was the same filly who did that to him in chapter 1), and fake Sombra pretends that he is defeated by the filly. The filly, whose name is Glass Slipper, points at Sombra's cutie mark curiously.
-Main character is confused and stares at his cutie mark. All but one of the ponies from the crowd scatter, which is Glass Slipper's father. He says that Sombra is acting odd. We found out that the stallion's name is Crystal Arrow. He says that his house was destroyed by the main character's mishaps in chapter 1. Fake Sombra decides to fix all of that.
-The group reaches Crystal Arrow's destroyed home. Sombra sends off Slipper to let her play with her friends at another house. Arrow, Luna, and fake Sombra climbs up the stairs. Fake Sombra finds something interesting about climbing up and down the stairs.
-Luna demonstrates on how to fix the house using dark magic. Apparently, Luna knows how to use both regular and dark magic, though she feels pain while using dark magic. Sombra succeeds after watching the demonstration, but ends up destroying one of the pieces due to spell overload. Luna gets stuck on the wall by the crystal pieces embedded in her mane and tail.
-Luna tries to free herself, but one of the crystal pieces knock over a jack supporting the roof. The whole thing collapses right on top of Luna!
-The other two ponies find out that Luna is still alive. The ceiling and the walls around them finally collapse, however. Crystal Arrow leaves his house for safety while Sombra muses over the mistake he caused.
-Crystal Arrow tells the message to the first guard he found rather than to Shining Armor. The message gets mixed up as it is relayed to Shining Armor and Cadance. This does not look good for fake Sombra….
-Fake Sombra tries to free Luna, but the guards find him! Main character says that he can fix this situation, and he frees Luna…by breaking the crystal wall that she is stuck on. And he throws her down a flight of stairs! OUCH!!!
-The guards angrily charge at Sombra, and he dodges the attack…by jumping out of the second-story window! DOUBLE OUCH!!!
-Fake Sombra continues to runs away from the guards. A Flugelhorn sounds, alerting Shining and Cadance. Both of them approach Arrow's ruined house and find an unconscious Luna lying in the house. Cadance tells Shining to take Luna back to the palace while she will find Sombra herself.
-Main character runs away, cursing his luck. He unintelligently hides inside a dumpster and gets spotted when he gets out of it a moment later. He continues to run away past the guards who blow the flugelhorn to alert the princess.
-Shining Armor carries Luna back to the palace, who seems to be fine and dazed aside from some obvious injuries.
-Fake Sombra uses his smoke-magic to float up above the air and gives out a speech to tell everyone that he is not evil and that he wants to help.
-“All eyes on me!" “From within your homes, from behind your windows, watch! I’ll prove to all of you that I am NOT EVIL!”
-“I! AM! HELPING!"
-He uses dark magic to repair Crystal Arrow's house. But that's not all he does.
-“LOOK AT ME! Look at me straight in the eyes! I want you to KNOW what I have done this day!”
-And he repairs all of the houses in the Crystal Empire. The main character then tells everyone to rejoice at his works as he slowly returns to his normal form.
-Fake Sombra looks around in confusion and realized that dark magic made him mad while he was fixing the city. He gets arrested by the guards again and is sent back to the palace…before Cadance zooms down from above and tackles the main character.
-Luna wakes up from the hospital and tells Shining that her injury was due to an accident. Shining asked why Luna didn't use her teleportation magic to herself out of the wall. Luna facehoofs and hits the huge lump on her head.
-Enter Cadance, who is carrying the captured Sombra. She hurls it at Shining and furiously stomps her way back to her workroom. Looks like all of that stress she had to deal with throughout the story has taken a huge toll on her.
-Luna, who seems to have mostly recovered from her injuries, leaves the matters in Shining and Cadance's hooves.

Overall, I loved the interaction between the main character and the princesses. Now that Luna has left, I want to see how Shining and the incredibly stressed-out Cadance will deal with Sombra in the next chapter.

Also, in response to my previous post, the highest number that I saw in the "Live Reader Count" last night was 194. The number wavered around from 120-145 while I was reading the story today. It waned down to 100-110 before I finished it.

Last edited Dec 28, 2014 at 08:26PM EST

So… that Tirek story got me thinking. Tirek was an asshole. Like, really, he had literally no redeeming qualities. Discord wasn't truly evil, he just wanted to have fun (and ended up a good guy). Chrysalis wanted to feed her hive. Sombra… didn't have any redeeming qualities, but he didn't have enough characterization? Tirek, though? He's the first of the show's villains I've wanted to personally execute. Or better yet, let an OC of mine do it. (I also have an idea for a fic where during his rampage, Ace and Vinyl are hiding in their basement, and Ace is slowly losing his mind until Vinyl brings him back down.)

But what about you guys? What do you think about Tirek? (And for the record, he only really went to Ponyville, Canterlot, and Appleloosa.)

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