At last, a place to post all the weird RWBY fanfiction I find!
Anyway, I like RWBY a lot. The first season feels like more of a proof of concept than anything, but still enjoyable. One criticism I hear sometimes is that RWBY's story is just an excuse for fight scenes. That accusation only holds up for the early episodes, because the second season upped its game in terms of characterization and world-building. Still, I was frustrated by the slow pacing. For two seasons, they were implying that something big was coming, but it sure was taking its sweet time. And the character development, while better, only came in small jolts now and then.
Season three started out much like the second, with some good bits of character development and bunch of new cosplay-bait. Then, halfway through, it became a whole different show. In retrospect, as soon as Pyrrha came into Ozpin's office, nothing was the same again. "Fall" was like a warning that shit was about to get real. And real it got, a few episodes later. Cerebus Syndrome has a bad reputation, but sometimes, getting serious is exactly what the doctor ordered. RWBY is a prime example. For those last few episodes of season three, the character and plot development was coming fast and furious. The big terrible thing finally arrived and, Though it was disturbing to watch, it was also satisfying to see the stakes raised and the event live up to the hype. Those last few episodes of season three provided excellent storytelling and I haven't felt so invested in a show in a long time.
One thing I noticed about RWBY's shift in tone had to do with the contrast between character design and violence. Most of the characters are really cute, and for the first few seasons, the fighting consisted of fantasy violence. It was thrilling, but never realistic. Once the change was made, they started sprinkling in gruesome, realistic violence. The fights were still fantasy-based, but there was now the threat that one of those hits would land just right and kill/maim one of these cute characters we've come to love. Disturbing as it is, the increased brutality made the situation seem way more intense and showcased how much we've come to care about the characters. And it wasn't mindless violence either. Each one was carefully staged and the implications make you think carefully. I've gotten into more than one argument over what those deaths mean.
What I'd like to see in the next season: While going serious was a good thing for RWBY, I also hope it doesn't gain a constantly dark atmosphere, free of any comic relief. Maybe the first few episodes will throw some gags our way. Also, character development for Nora and Ren. Some people are bent out of shape over Lancaster, but I'm willing to give it chance if the writers go that route. While I'm sure the increase in Lancaster art lately is partially a way of soothing over the loss of Arkos, I think the main reason for its rise is because Rooster Teeth set it up so perfectly. Two attractive, presumable hormonal, teenagers, both hurting from loss and in need of comforting, go on a dangerous journey and spend every waking moment together, relying on each other for survival. Is it really so hard to imagine why people might ship them? If the writers take it slow and have the characters express initial guilt over becoming attracted to each other, it might work.
Lastly, RWBY Chibi is neat, but there's really not much to it yet. I'm not crazy about the character designs. Too doll-like. Still, I'll keep watching. Also, Ruby made a dick joke. Ha!